Reviews For Unbreakable
Reviewer: angel_from_africa Anonymous Date: 04/25/06 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 5

that was funny... i can see that happening...update soon.. great work!!


Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review! I love writing Chris...I\'m terrible at writing bits of humor but he somehow manages to make me write okay pieces of comedy. Update coming either tomorrow or by the end of the week! Stay tuned!


Reviewer: Sindi Anonymous Date: 04/25/06 - 05:46PM Title: Chapter 4

Aww that poor girl, Justin is so rude. Update quick well done!



Author's Response: Thanks for checking out the story Sindi! I\'m glad you liked it. Don\'t worry, Vivian can look after herself as you\'ll see in some of the following chapters!


Reviewer: jenna Anonymous Date: 04/25/06 - 12:16AM Title: Chapter 4

wow! i am guessing the page with the rules on it was from her mom and thats why she said and did the things she did. justin should feel bad. keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out Jenna! You\'ll find out in due time who wrote the rules and why she acts the way she acts. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it ^^


Reviewer: Gigi Signed Date: 04/24/06 - 10:55PM Title: Chapter 4

Who would make her feel like she has to be perfect?

Author's Response: Ah m\'dear, you\'ll find that out in a later chapter ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: angel_from_africa Signed Date: 04/24/06 - 07:42PM Title: Chapter 4

that was funny as heck!! I always use the word twat!! I love the word!! Good job!! Update soon!!


Author's Response: \'twat\' is great...good fun word when you want to be humorous but also have a tad of seriousness going on in the story. Thanks so much for checking the story out...update coming soon!


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 04/24/06 - 03:41PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow.. *stares blankly at the monitor* that was intense.. an i think she overracted just a tad.. but hey i would be pissed to.. Wow just wow.. i dont know what to say.. good job can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I wanted Vivian to seem like she doesn\'t have any control over her emotions when an outside force pushes her out of her element and that\'s why I think she overreacted. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You\'re the best :)


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 04/24/06 - 02:28PM Title: Chapter 4

oooohh they're so mean!!! And Shebot??!!! LOL. Good luck on your finals!!

Author's Response: Boys will be boys! Lol and Chris always gets in other people\'s business...at least my Chris does. Thanks for the well wishes :) and an even bigger thank you for reading!!


Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Date: 04/23/06 - 11:20PM Title: Chapter 3

I like this story so far! Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Kelly! Look for an update coming this week!


Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Date: 04/23/06 - 04:16AM Title: Chapter 3

Well, first off, good luck with the exams.

 

I love your writing style, it's amazing. And I love the stories even more. Absolutely brilliant idea and refreshing because Vivian doesn't just know how to be a PR and 'fails' at her first project.

 

I'm loving it



Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you Katie. I really want exams to be over with so I can just get out of school (I am totally slacking right now too lol). And thank you so much for the compliment, it truly means a lot and I\'m glad you like the story so far! Thank you so much for reading!


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 04/22/06 - 03:00PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice update!!! Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You\'re encouragement is very much appreciated :)





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