Reviews For Unbreakable
Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 05/09/06 - 05:15PM Title: Chapter 10

Another great chapter but i feel so sorry for vivian, her parents are such a$$ holes. They totally don't deserve her as a  daughter.


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 05/08/06 - 06:01PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow...um...Wow. Can we say psycho mother? I mean damn, if you hate your daughter that much, why would you want her to visit? Poor Vivian. I kinda wish she had stood up for herself though. Great chapter... update soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the read, Lizzy! I don\'t think Carolyn hates Vivian at all. She just misses Lucy and Vivian reminds her of her daughter even though she\'s completely different. But thank you so much for the read and review, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying the story!!


Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Date: 05/08/06 - 03:31PM Title: Chapter 10

oh my goodness i hate her parents. I cant wait to see what is going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the read Kayla! Glad you\'re liking the story so far. From what I know, I don\'t think you guys have any idea what\'s going to happen next. Hooray for plot twists! Thanks for the read and review =)


Reviewer: nikki g. Anonymous Date: 05/08/06 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 10

still lovin' this story, so please update real soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Thanks Nikki! Glad you\'re liking the story...I think we\'ll get an update up either later today or tomorrow. These reviews are really keeping me going! Thanks so much!!


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 05/08/06 - 11:35AM Title: Chapter 10

Her mother is a sick person, really. I hope some day Vivian gets over her belittling. *sighs*



Author's Response: I love writing Carolyn though. Evil characters are my specialty. =)


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 05/08/06 - 10:44AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow.. that was intense man.. i see what you said about this going downhill.. i dont know what i would of done if my parents acted like that towards me. lol i really enjoyed htis chapter.. an i loved how justin stood up for Viv against her mom.. that was great lol.. i can't wait for more..

Author's Response: Oh its just getting started my dear! Lol...pandemonium will break loose in the next coming chapters. I\'m so excited to write them out!!





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