Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 02:38AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

Hmmm, could it be that there's something going on between Adam and Erica? Because he doesn't seem the cheating type to me...

Ugh I want to punch Vivian again!! Okay, so Adam is the safe choice, but what about Justin? She's not fooling me, uh uh, I know she cares for him, much more than in a friendly way. She's just trying to set her life straight and move on, I see that but, again she's taking the easy way out.

No good can come out of this.

Must. Read. More. Pleeeeeeease!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your imput Violeta. You\'ll find out more about Adam and Erica as the story progresses. I\'m not going to say anything more about them beause I don\'t want to give anything away :) And Vivian is being a butt...this much is true. But like I said, everything will come together in the end. For good or bad I can\'t say but things will make sense :) - Amanda


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/12/06 - 02:29AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

holy shit!! SHES ENGAGED TO ADAM!! no no that can't happen.. lol great chapter hun i loved it but WTF  NO she's supposed to be wth justin! damn lol *takes a deep breathe* well damn what a twist man.. i can't wait for more

Author's Response: Breathe dear...don\'t worry things will make sense by the end of the story. Thank you so much for your reviews and it is such a joy talking to you :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Ivonne-Marie Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 02:00AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

who the hell is this red head biiaacchhh??? Can not wait for the next chapter. im hooked lol


Author's Response: Your comment made me actually lol! Heehee. I\'m glad you like the story Ivonne-Marie and an update should be up within the week. Things are gonna take off now! -Amanda


Reviewer: sugarsweet323 Signed Date: 06/12/06 - 01:33AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

this story is excellent.  i absolutely love it.  keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you so much sugarsweet! I\'m so glad you like it and thanks for the review! :) - Amanda


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/11/06 - 12:22PM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

Wow that was a really great chapter.. i loved it sweet thang! an thank god the two talked about the abortion. an i agree with her reason in a way. cuz it would have ruined him and the guys career but on the other hand she should have included him in the decisions about the baby an what to do about it. Well i really hope you tell us more about what is going to happen at Lynns home, so keep up the great work the chapter was awesome, an i loved it! so can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks Amber! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Update is up but then again you\'re reading it right now. At least I hope you are :) - Amanda


Reviewer: meaghan Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 08:26PM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

ok, i really need more after than.  *tear*  please dont keep me waiting for long or i might die in desperation.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review Meaghan! Update is up right now:) Hope you enjoy it - Amanda


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 06/09/06 - 12:15PM Title: Breakaway

My god. I'm am totally speechless right now. I can honestly say that these two stories are two the best fan fics I have ever read. I have never had my mouth drop open while reading a story; I can't even count how many times that happened. Where is your website being hosted? I think Nikki would be thrilled to host such an amazing talent on Tasting Eden, and I would definitely reccommend you. Oh, and do you have a story layout yet? Because if you don't, I'd love to make one. Vivian and Justin just get me all riled up, and I have to do more to get closer to 'em. Sheesh, I sound like a stalker. But anyways, email me if you want to talk. I am totally serious about my offers. And once again, I applaud your writing. Absolutly astounding.



Author's Response: Wow...thank you so much. I\'m speechless myself at your kind words Laurie. Just wow, thank you so much for the feedback and the compliments and you gals on Tasting Eden are amazing! Wow. I don\'t have a story layout yet and I emailed you a couple of days ago so hopefully you got that :) Thank you so much for checking out these stories and I\'m so glad you like them :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/09/06 - 09:29AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

Aww I'm so glad you gotta to see him at MMA's i bet he was hotter in the flesh? A great chapter, as usual, & they nearly had a moment. I know at times I have been nasty about Justin but i think he's so weet now in this story, i even learnt how to cook peach cobbler, lol. I hope Vivian gets better! I love this story! update soon. xxx



Author's Response: Amy, SO hot in the flesh. Like holy crap. He was amazing Yup they very nearly did have a moment there I\'m glad you caught it! Thanks so much for your continued support in this story! I\'m so glad you\'re liking it thus far and it\'ll only get better from here! - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/09/06 - 03:41AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

That letter was so sweet... kinda funny too. They seriously better hook up... again... after Viv gets through her problems. Great update girl.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review Lizzy! Glad you liked it! - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/09/06 - 03:41AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

That letter was so sweet... kinda funny too. They seriously better hook up... again... after Viv gets through her problems. Great update girl.

Author's Response: Haha! They might hook up, they might not LIzzy. Just gotta stay tuned! Thanks for reading and reviewing so far! I really appreciate it! - Amanda





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