Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 06/22/06 - 11:47AM Title: Slipped Away

Hey, no problem about the layout. Twas my pleasure. I'll email you about Unbreakable. Your PS made me know that something bad was going to happen, but damn, I was so not expecting this! Vivian is just being selfish now. Justin was right. It HAS been all about her. If anyone should be getting angry, it should be Justin. And if Adam is Pro-Life, I despise him even more. Stupid bastard. Can't wait for an update!


Author's Response: Laurie again, thank you so much for the Unspeakable/Unbreakable layouts! They are absolutely amazing and I love them to death! And thank you for your constant reviews and feedback, I love to hear from you :) Update is coming soon, thanks so much for all of your help! - Amanda


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 10:52AM Title: Slipped Away

I love your fight scenes, they're so realistic. I'm biting my nails in the wait for the next chapter. Adam is an idiot!! I hope Vivian sees that before it's too late. And I'm glad that Justin is starting to speak.



Author's Response: Violeta, thank you for the compliment about the fight scenes. I always think they\'re too much but I\'m glad you find them realistic. Adam is kind of a moron but you\'ll see why in the next chapter. Thanks so much for the review and the feedback, you\'re too kind! Update coming soon - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 09:31AM Title: Slipped Away

GAH! What the hell?! I thought he was getting to her and she just up and leaves? I really, really, really hope this doesn't ruin Viv and Justin. Let her find out what a jerk Adam is!! PLease make this okay!!!

Author's Response: Sarah, thanks so much for the feedback and the reivew! I\'m glad you enjoyed this latest installment and I might make everything okay. Just have to wait and see :) Update coming soon, thank you for your kindness! - Amanda


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 07:29AM Title: Slipped Away

Ay yi yi.

It hurts my heart reading this story - damn you, you're too good at this, I'm way too involved *lol*



Author's Response: Aww I\'m sorry it hurts your head, Hollie. Not too badly I hope :) Thanks for the review and thank you for the compliment. I think I\'m a little too involved as well...I kinda don\'t want to write the last chapter! Update coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 07:20AM Title: Slipped Away

Vivian seriously needs help why is she doing this to herself and why is doing this to poor Justin. I can't believe i use to like Adam he's a total creep, i don't know what he's upto but he's upto something i can only hope that Vivian wakes up and smells the coffee before Justin gives up, because surely he won't wait for her forever? Update soon, this was a great but sad chapter. xxx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Amy! Glad you enjoyed it. Update is coming soon and thank you so much for the feedback! - Amanda


Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 05:16AM Title: Slipped Away

I really want to scream..is she really that pig headed.. Here is Justin confessing how he feels ( as if his actions werent enough) and she still walks away.stupid,stupid,stupid.  Adam well i really wanted to like him at the begining of the story but now he needs to go away and now would work just fine. I cant believe viv is saying justin causes the problems cause no one made her do the things she did.    but on a brighter side if she doesnt get with jsutin  she should still open her eyes and leave adam cause something not right with his situation.    Great update as always..Im looking forward to the next one. Got several questions bouncing around that i cant wait to see how it ends.  :)



Author's Response: Jenna, thank you so much for the review and I\'m glad you liked the update even though you want to kill Vivian. Everything will be explained within the next two chapters...hopefully the questions you have will be answered. Thank you again for the feedback! Update coming soon - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/22/06 - 03:13AM Title: Slipped Away

well damn. I know what Justin did was messed up but he was DRUNK and Adam IS cheating. I don't understand why she has him up on such a high pedestal. Justin and Viv can't be over, they just can't. *Tear* Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Lizzy! Its funny because when people are so in love with someone else they\'ll be blind to just about everything they\'re doing wrong. That\'s Vivian\'s problem. She thinks Adam is the perfect thing and can do no wrong. So Justin and Viv might be over, but they might not. You\'ll have to wait and see! Thanks for the review! Update coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/22/06 - 01:33AM Title: Slipped Away

wow that was intense.. Vivian needed that lil wake up call, an i seriously wanna smack some sense into her!!! Dude Adam is all wrong for her, an justin is the best solution i swear to god if this don't open her eyes imma hunt her ass down an beat it into her head that justin is the person for her!! damn girl you sure know how to make a person wanna kill another!! GREAT CHAPTER CAN'T FOR MORE!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Amber! I\'m glad you liked it. Don\'t worry everything will be resolved within the next two chapters. Don\'t worry! - Amanda


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 06/21/06 - 03:42PM Title: Perfect Situation

JESUS H. ROOSEVELT CHRIST!!!! HE IS GOING TO BE IN A LOT OF TROUBLE WHEN VIVIAN FINDS OUT WHAT HE SAID!! LORD HAVE MERCY AND LET HER COME TO HER SENCES!!! LIKE I HOPE SHE DOES IT LIKE IN THE KELLY CLARKSON VIDEO FOR "BEHIND HAZEL EYES" AND DUMP ADAM AND RUN AWAY WITH JUSTIN OR PLEASE TRY MY OTHER IDEA I WROTE YOU!!! BUT PLEASE DON'T LET HER MARRY ADAM AND FINALLY SEE JUSTIN THE WAY HE SEES HER!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your thoughts Vegas Chick! I\'m glad you liked the update and there\'s one on the way! You\'ll get your ending and your answers soon enough! Patience is key :) Thanks for the review and the continuous support, I really appreciate it! - Amanda


Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Date: 06/18/06 - 05:28PM Title: Perfect Situation

I really love this story.  It just keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Leanne! I\'m glad you like it and thanks for the review. Update coming soon! - Amanda





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