Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 06/18/06 - 02:37PM Title: Perfect Situation

Am I the only one who thought that Justin flipping out at Adam wasn't actually that horrible? He obviously wasn't going to do it when he was sober. Meh, I'm not liking this Adam. Not so much. Viv needs to drop his ass like a hot potato in the desert sun of Arizona...okay, now I'm getting into bad analogies. Whatever, Adam needs to be dumped. lol!


Author's Response: Awww you bumped Arizona! That\'s my homestate, Gold Star for you Laurie! Lmao! And no, it wasn\'t bad for Justin to flip out on Adam. At all. I\'m glad you liked the update and there\'s one coming soon! Thank you so, so, so, much for all your help and the layout for Unbreakable is AWESOME! Thank you so much, you are amazing and a half! - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/18/06 - 05:38AM Title: Perfect Situation

Wow, that was another great chapter, i can't believe Justin told Adam about the abortion but i guess alchol does make you tell the truth. And Adam, i don't know what to think about him anymore is he a cheater, is he not a cheater? I don't know anymore. I just hope Vivian gets some sense. Update soon. xxx



Author's Response: Thanks for the review Amy and I\'m glad you liked the chapter! It makes me happy that you\'re confused about Adam because that\'s what I wanted. Confusion, it makes you more surprised in the end :) Update coming soon, thanks for your support and the reviews! - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 10:57PM Title: Perfect Situation

Oh shit!!! This...is...not...good! Vivian is going to be so freakin livid!!! Justin is going to have his balls handed to him on a platter! I can't believe I've missed so much by being out of town for business! I can't wait to see what happens! yay!

Author's Response: Haha! That was quite the image, Sarah! Thanks for that. You didn\'t miss too much while being out of town and I hope your business went well :) Update coming soon, thanks so much for the review and the continued support! - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 09:31PM Title: Perfect Situation

Damn. Justin kinda fucked up there. I know Adam acts like this completely loving guy but what's with the Erica bullshit? Why does that chick keep showing up out of nowhere? ugh. lol. Great update chica. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Lizzy! I swear answers will come within the next few chapters! Promise you! I\'m so glad you liked the chapter and thank you so much for your continuous support and the reviews! You\'re awesome! - Amanda


Reviewer: meaghan Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 09:02PM Title: Perfect Situation

i'm really dying for them to get together and u said u only had 3 chapters left!!  does that mean there's only like one chapter left??!!  i need them to hook up for real!!!


Author's Response: There are fourteen chapters to Unspeakable, meaghan so you get three more chapters (I think) and then the closing remarks. Don\'t worry everything will make sense in the end. I\'m not leaving any crazy cliff hangers or nothing. Well...maybe one. *cackles* Thank you so much for the review and your continued support! - Amanda


Reviewer: sugarsweet323 Signed Date: 06/17/06 - 01:17PM Title: Perfect Situation

this was really good.  leave it to justin to tell adam about the baby while he's drunk.  but then again i really don't want vivian to marry adam no matter how perfect he appears to be.  cuz i have a feeling that something is going on between him and erica and i don't like it.  she is supposed to be with justin in my opinion.  keep it coming.  i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sugarsweet! I\'m glad you liked the chatper and thanks for the feedback! You\'ll find out about Adam and Erica soon enough although it isn\'t the relationship you\'re making it out to be :) Update coming soon! Thanks again for your support! - Amanda


Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 10:07AM Title: Perfect Situation

Justin would get drunk and spill his guts to the groom *shakes head* that boy. I hope Adam is screwing Erica. Then justin and vivian can have a happy ending. See. I just wrote the ending for you! LOL! Kidding of course...maybe... :P Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Hmm...that should be my ending! Thanks Kayla...if only it were that simple though : \\ don\'t worry though, an update is ocming soon and you\'ll get your ending soon enough :) Thanks for the review Kayla, I\'m glad you\'re liking the story! - Amanda


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 07:38AM Title: Perfect Situation

Wow - I write one review saying I want more and next day it's there. Now that's service! *lol* Anyway, Justin is a royal idiot and while I'm sure he's probably right about Adam, he's seriously going to regret the way he just did that - and that's even before we start on him dropping the abortion into conversation

Author's Response: I live to serve Hollie! *lol* And yes, Justin is an idiot but he was drunk off his ass and you\'re right again in knowing that he\'ll regret what he said. Next chatper though :) - Amanda


Reviewer: jenna Anonymous Date: 06/17/06 - 03:55AM Title: Perfect Situation

Okay now I really dont like Adam.  I mean why argue with someone who is drunk...if hes so great why go to that level....hes kinda an ass now...and good for justin i mean i cant believe he talked about viv being pregnant, but good for him.  he need to vent alittle and i think adam need to hear that someone else thinks the whole erica thing is kinda wierd and wrong almost.. i dont know if he cheated on viv or not. and then viv not letting ryan design the dress i would kill over if my friend wanted to design the dress... and if my guy said no then i would explain why it would mean so much more than a ress of the rack at a store. plus if i was worried abotu a friend id go over and see what was up not send the boy im marring..okay now that ive vented a little   really great update..i love how the turns keep comming. 

Author's Response: You and Justin got to vent! Yay Jenna! And yeah Adam is kind of an ass but I won\'t say if he cheated or not. You\'ll have to wait a few more chapters. Thanks so much for the constant reviews and the feedback Jenna, it is such a joy to read what you think! Thank you, thank you! - Amanda


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/17/06 - 01:27AM Title: Perfect Situation

Damn, justin really dug himself a deep whole.. but hey i would of done the same thing.. I wouldn't be able to watch someone i love marry another woman.. An damn Adam is an ass.. a total ass.. an im really starting to love Ryan.. to bad he's gay lol Well update soon girl! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hey Ambs! Glad you liked the latest installment! And I love Ryan to freaking death he\'s so much fun to write. And yup, Justin\'s in big doo doo but you\'ll have to wait for the next update :) Thanks for being you, you\'re awesome Miss Amber! - Amanda





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