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Reviewer: sugarsweet323
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Date: 06/15/06 - 02:56PM
Title: Gone
well it's about time she realized it. and thank you ryan for knocking some sense into the woman. it's a great story and i say she should listen to her heart. i love it. keep it coming
Author's Response: Thanks sugarsweet! And yay for realizing it in the nick of time but it could still be too late for her to do anything about it. The entire eleventh chapter is from Justin\'s POV so we\'ll have to wait to hear from Vivian in Chapter twelve. And yes, I luff Ryan to death. I\'m honored that you think its a great story and thank you again for reading and reveiwing! I really appreciate it :) - Amanda
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/06 - 11:51AM
Title: Gone
Ahhh!!!! Awesome chapter. At last she realizes. I hope it's not too late!!!! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Amy! Glad you like the update :) It might not be too late but you\'ll have to check back for the next update to see what happens :) Thank you so much for checking the story out and for reading it as well :) - Amanda
Reviewer: stacey
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/06 - 11:44AM
Title: Gone
ohh shit that chapter was awesome. ryan is awesome. he's that friend that everybody should have, that we hate because he's brutally honest and not afraid to hurt our feelings, but we love him anyway because he knows us and loves us anyway. where is britney in all of this? anyway... that chapter was fantastic. especially the part where she stupidly asks justin to give her away at the wedding. his reaction was perfect.
Author's Response: Stacey, rest assured Britney is mentioned in the next chapter (since its finished!) and she\'ll play a bigger part as the story progresses, I promise :) I\'m glad you liked this update and I\'m glad Ryan is getting a warm reception from everyone. I love him and he reminds me of so many of my friends in the sense that the majority of them are blunt and to the point. Thanks again for the review Stacey and for continuing to read this story! - Amanda
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 06/15/06 - 11:43AM
Title: Gone
wow.. I love Ryan he is so freakin awesome for opening up Vivians eyes to the love justin has for her. She needed a harsh wake up call, an she finally got it.. So hopefully she'll choose justin over ryan. Lol Great up date cutie! i loved it. An about your lil shout out to me.. You very welcome! I love helping people discover new things. An html is a bitch an half as you can see.. but you got it down :-P So update soon, an i'll talk to ya when you get on!
Author's Response: Yeah, html is a freaking bitch but you\'ve helped me out loads and I\'ve already learned alot. You\'re the bestest! And thanks for the review! Don\'t get discouraged about your story...people will come around, ya just gotta pimp it :) Thanks again Amber and an update is coming soon! - Amanda
Reviewer: Kayla
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/06 - 11:29AM
Title: Gone
Oh my goodness. vivian is an idiot. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Kayla! I\'m glad you liked the update and yup, Vivian is a big idiot! Update coming soon and thank you so much m\'dear for the review - Amanda
Reviewer: lroberts
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Date: 06/15/06 - 11:13AM
Title: Gone
Ohhhhh SNAP!! Go Ryan, go Ryan! Man, I would give up my right boob to hear this special version of Gone (whether it exists or not lol). Great chapter, loved the detail at the end, even though it got a tad cliché. But it's hard not to when you're dealing with WonderBoy. *sigh* *heartflutter* Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Well the lyrics at the start of the chapter are from the Grammy performance back in 2003. I believe its up on Youtube if you want to see it there. And yeah I know it did get cliche at the end but then again I was writing the end at 2 AM and yeah...it didn\'t come out quite the way I wanted it to but thanks for pointing that out. I might rewrite that ending for the website. But thank you so much for the review, Laurie! I\'m glad you\'re liking the story so far and an update should be up soon :) - Amanda
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/06 - 06:55AM
Title: Gone
That was a great chapter i am so glad she has finally admitted to her self that she loves him. I only wish that she is brave enough to follow her heart because i still don't believe what Adam told her about Erica. Update soon xxx p.s it's nice to think gone was about Vivian rather than about Britney going out for too long.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Amy! I\'m glad you liked the chapter and yup she\'s admitted it to herself but will she actually follow through? And I\'m not going to say anyting about Adam because he\'s coming up in a few chapters and yeah...you\'l see. And I\'m glad you liked that I changed the meaning behind \'Gone\' from Britney to Vivian! Thanks again Amy you\'re great! - Amanda
Reviewer: lance_fan_4eva
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Date: 06/13/06 - 06:34PM
Title: The Time it Takes to Fall
oooh I love that Adam and Viv are engaged!~~~~ But I can feel a big breakup coming with that redhead involved LOL. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for checking the story out lance_fan! I\'m glad you like it and I\'m glad someone likes the fact that Adam and Vivian are engaged lol! Breakup involving the red head might happen, but you\'ll have to wait and see :) - Amanda
Reviewer: Ashlie
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Date: 06/13/06 - 01:27AM
Title: The Time it Takes to Fall
Of course you had to get us readers to love Adam and then just crush our hearts by having him become a cheater. Still a super awesome story though. Cannot wait to see what happens next. Feel free to update ASAP! :)
Author's Response: Ashlie, so glad you\'re enjoying this story and a review should be up soon! Don\'t put Adam in the cheater category just yet. He\'s still got some growing to do in the closing chapters of this story :) - Amanda
Reviewer: Ashlie
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Date: 06/13/06 - 12:50AM
Title: Warning
My reaction is the exact same as joone's! I was just catching up with the sequel but was going to post a comment on the last chapter, but of course this one needed one. That ending was crazy. I literally covered my mouth with both hands to prevent any shouting. Amazing. Okay, now I'm gonna go read some more. Author's Response: At first I was confused when I read this review and thought you flipped out about what happened at the end of Chapter Nine but then I saw that you commented on Warning and it all made sense! I\'m glad you\'re liking the story so far and thank you so much for checking it out, Ashlie! Thank you, thank you, thank you! - Amanda
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