Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 10:11PM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!! that girl is definitely mental! update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah Vivian is insane! Thank you so much for the review and your continued support isis! I really appreciate it :) - Amanda


Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 10:11PM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!! that girl is definitely mental! update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah Vivian is insane! Thank you so much for the review and your continued support isis! I really appreciate it :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 07:26PM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

Uh, I can't believe Adam. He's a bastard in hiding. Poor her and when this comes out, sad. Please update soon and don't draw out their relationship when he is cheating on her...give a few chappies and then let the truth out. It can get boring after a while. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion Nikki! And thank you for the review and continued support! I\'m glad you like the story so far and don\'t worry, things will be explained sooner rather than later :) But not too soon. There\'s maybe at least four chapters or so left...maybe five. Thanks again! - Amanda


Reviewer: meaghan Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 07:20PM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

noooo!!!!!! that wasnt supposed to happen!! make it stop!!!  u need to fix it and fix it fast before i freak out completely!!  but i cant wait for more!!


Author's Response: I might fix it, meaghan...I might not. haha. But don\'t worry, you\'ll get the answers to your questions soon and I promise there won\'t be a lot of freak outs left. At least I don\'t think so :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 06/12/06 - 03:38PM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

OMG POOR JUSTIN!!! I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM!! I HOPE THAT HE LIKE CRASHES THE WEDDING BECAUSE HE FINDS OUT THAT ADAM IS REALLY A CHEATER AND HE RUNS OFF WITH HER HIMSELF!!! DO IT LIKE MATT DID ON 7TH HEAVEN!!!!

Author's Response: If I watched Seventh Heaven I\'d probably get the allusion but since I stopped watching it in like 8th grade lmao. But who says Adam is a cheater? Like I said in earlier chapters, don\'t pass judgement on this character so soon, he\'s much more in depth than just the cheating boyfriend/fiance. Trust me. - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 01:29PM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

awwwwwwwwwwwww. That's kinda sad. Adam kinda sprung that engagement stuff on her though. And who is that chic? Seriously, she was RUDE to Viv and Adam seems waaaaaaaaay too close to her. Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Lizzy! I\'m glad you liked the chapter and you\'ll find out about the chick Adam\'s hanging around with in the next chapter. Thanks for reading! - Amanda


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 06/12/06 - 12:03PM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

AHHHHH! NONONONONONONONO! Vivian you IDIOT! Adam is nice, but Justin is...JUSTIN! MARRY JUSTIN NOT ADAM! *faints*


Author's Response: Yeah Vivian is being an idiot lol! I\'m glad you liked the latest chapter (at least I hope you did...you seem a bit upset!) and thank you again for the review and all your help! I\'ll email you tonight:) - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 10:00AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

Aww poor Justin. But Vivian, wtf!? I know Adam is 'great' and everything but if i didn't see or hear from my boyfriend in two months & he was working with a bitch like erica (who he didn't even tell me about!) I wouldn't say yes to anything he asked, i mean are there no phones in Japan!?  Vivian needs help, but i still love her and Justin. Anyways this was another great chapter, hun. Update soon. xxx

Author's Response: Thanks Amy! I\'m glad you like it and I\'ll update soon. Like I told Jenna and other readers, everything will make sense with the next chapter. I just decided to not put it into the ninth chapter lol! But than you so much for the review and an update will be coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 09:24AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

Whoa...wow...That's a lot to take in. He comes back and just proposes. I think this Erica chick is just going to cause major problems!!

Good work! Can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much Sarah! You\'ll have to wait and see if this Erica girl causes any problems :) And yes, out of the blue proposals are just fabulous don\'t you think? *evil laughter* Thanks for the continued support! - Amanda


Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Date: 06/12/06 - 04:49AM Title: The Time it Takes to Fall

umm well i dont know how i honestly feel about the engagement.... i mean  if adam was gone for that long and she was worried that things might have changed over the time apart, why would she say yes so fast..and why would he leave if he was so worried about her so soon.  i mean he was gone for a month and then back for 2 days then gone again. plus the way he was defending ericas attitude would have bugged the crap out of me if i was viv.  i could understand if maybe viv had given attitude first but she didnt plus adam was he boyfriend.  and poor justin, sunburns suck completely. and at first i jsut wanted viv and justin to be friends. but now  i feel bad for him.   i know your going somewhere with this so ill have to wait to find out... good work as always.  -jenna

Author's Response: Yup I am definitely going somewhere with this, Jenna and I appreciate your feedback and your thought process into this story. I love chunky reviews! If there was a thumbs up emoticon you\'d be getting it! lol! Thank you so much for your continued support and for giving me fun and interesting reviews to read! Update coming soon - Amanda





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