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Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/06 - 10:20PM
Title: Amazes Me
i just love love your stories! They are so heart warming and just awwww worthy, This one just made me smile ... cant wait to read the others now ...
Author's Response: Thanks, Joone! Happy reading! -- Renee
Reviewer: Jessica
Signed
Date: 06/11/06 - 10:58PM
Title: Amazes Me
This was cute. It would be a great story if your fleshed it out. Put more now inbetween the flashbacks. And thanks for writing a Lance story. That doesn't seem to happen very ofter lately.
Author's Response: Hi there, Jessica. Yeah, Lance needs some attention every now and again, too. I\'ve never written a capture before, so it was kind of neat trying to take a span of a few minutes and turn it into a piece worth the read. Thanks for the input! -- Renee
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 06/09/06 - 06:39PM
Title: Amazes Me
It would be nice if it was longer.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input, Gigi. It\'s much appreciated. I actually sat for a while and tried to figure out how to make it longer --more detail, more flashbacks -- without having it get redundant . . . especially since there\'s really not a plot to it. There just didn\'t seem to be a way to expand it with it just being a scene, really. If you have any ideas -- feel free to share! Thanks again! -- Renee
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