Reviews For Deranged Delusions
Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 09/12/06 - 10:16PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

OH SHIT!!! things are gonna get more heated from now on. UPDATE SOON!!!!!


Reviewer: CoachTiffany Signed Date: 09/12/06 - 10:01PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

Ahhh I love it! hahahaha oh this is exciting...cheers me up since I didn't get the cd today...I'm stuck in the middle of frickin nowhere at college and all we have is a Wal-Mart that sells the edited version...so much for pre-ordering and getting it on time :( but this just made my night! I can't wait for the next chapter!


Reviewer: smee01 Signed Date: 09/12/06 - 09:58PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

Awesome chapter.  I can not wait for more. 


Reviewer: angel_from_africa Anonymous Date: 09/12/06 - 09:54PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

that was a very good chapter!! Keep us updated!!!


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/12/06 - 09:00PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

AHHHHHHH! YESYESYESYESYESYES!!! I was smiling like an insane woman when they started going at it! YAY! You have made me a very happy bean.


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/12/06 - 08:45PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

I'm not sure I like this "hate you to death" bit. I'm off to read the chapter...


Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 09/12/06 - 08:34PM Title: Can You Feel 'My Love' Tonight?

okay first of all, i did read it bitch...well except the ending. so you're authors note is BS. and second of all BITCH how dare you post the last part, with out letting me edit. now that was true.

 

omg, you're lucky it's justin day or else, or else i just might be a really mean mixed bitch. i have to go work out, or i would text something not so nice.

 

justin and lauren. hot. 


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 09/12/06 - 12:42AM Title: You've Got a Foe in Me

Justin is such a fucking asshole. I would have added a SLAP with those last words Lauren dealt him. Seriously what is his problem? Just cause he's not man enough to admit that he's in love with her doesn't mean he has to make it seem like it was her fault. Ugh Justin needs to change his attitude or die a slow painful death. Right now I'm voting for the painful death.lol. Update soon please.


Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover Signed Date: 09/11/06 - 05:02PM Title: You've Got a Foe in Me

Wow! Just wow. That was good. I still can't wait until she finally finds out that Justin is pushing her away beacuse he's in love with her.


Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous Date: 09/11/06 - 02:09PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

Great!!





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