Reviews For Deranged Delusions
Reviewer: maureen Anonymous Date: 09/10/06 - 09:51PM Title: You've Got a Foe in Me

awesome  more please


Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 09/10/06 - 09:41PM Title: You've Got a Foe in Me

update soon please!


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 09/07/06 - 11:23PM Title: Stay With Me

awwww man it can't be over. Justin just needs to suck it up and admit his feelings. And why the hell did he do that? Why does he always run away from his feelings? Stupid man.lol. Great update girl... I loved it.


Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 02:13PM Title: Stay With Me

Wow!!!! I wonder what Lauren really feels about working with Clive Davis, and if she has feelings for Justin. I also wonder how Justin really going to feel when Lauren isn't around all the time since he's in love with her.

Great chapter, can't wait to read more and hope that it's soon.


Reviewer: CoachTiffany Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 11:51AM Title: Stay With Me

Ugh...that is so not what I wanted to see happen :( Put them back together! For the first time in this story I actually feel bad for Justin...


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 11:26AM Title: Stay With Me

Gah! I think that sums it up. Gah. The whole chapter was from Justin's POV, and I wanna know what Lauren is really thinking! *stomps foot* Yes, I sound like toddler, but dammit! I love how Trace was all emotional too. Oh...and whatever happened with those pictures Lauren took?


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 10:57AM Title: Stay With Me

ugh no no no!!  put them together dammit!!  haha, update again soon please!!


Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous Date: 09/06/06 - 10:15AM Title: Stay With Me

All I can say is that I LOVE THIS STORY!!


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 09/06/06 - 05:54AM Title: Stay With Me

WHYYY did he let her goo? NO! You idiot, she loves you too! So close, yet so far away. But I do love how now he's thinking about Lauren more so than himself, that's how you know he truly loves her. At the beginning of the story, he was was such an annoying putz lmao. It's amazing how a human being by just being there can change your heart forever. Pleassee let him tell her or her tell him. A kiss or hot sex or SOMETHING. Give a hint dammit! Gosh, some people lmao. I hate them cause they're just like me rofl. But anyway, I think you're doing an incredible job with this story and i'm enjoying it more and more. Don't take too long with an update, I'm excited!!


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 05:50AM Title: Stay With Me

oh justin just tell her the truth, can't wait for more!





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