Reviews For Deranged Delusions
Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 09/06/06 - 03:07AM Title: Stay With Me

LPS! Lmao that's exactly what YOU are, no doubt about it. ;) I love how I was bitching at you, talking about thanking me, and I read the last line, and lo and behold..."Thanks Jessica." I SUPPOSE that was a few brownie points for your bitch ass, but still--you're a LPS. Grr. Oh and I love how you used "Stay With Me"....damn, am I not inspiring, or am I not inspiring? Right now, you're blabbing about what's gonna happen, and quite honestly, we all know what's gonna happen if it's not in MY favor....remembere those text messages I promised? Don't forget about that. ;) Justin is a butt fuck. Why the hell did he let Lauren go? Oh yeah, cus he's a dumb ass and he thinks pushing her away was a good idea. God, he gets stupider by the second...and don't even get me started on that LPS LoHo. God that bitch, crying of JOY to leave Mr Timberlake and his sexy fuckable ass? Wtf, she needs to stop snorting crack. I'm pissed, onto next chapter. lmfao. Wow, this review sucked. I already tell you everything while I edit, so this is just another way of me to elaborate on my threats.....thanksok. Bye bye


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/04/06 - 02:49AM Title: Stove Fire

"Everything was great, until the house caught on fire." "Well shit, there goes the childhood home." Two funniest lines of the chapter. Again, pissage of the pantages. lol Update soon!


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/04/06 - 02:47AM Title: Whole New World

That cow tipping scene had me pissing myself. I was literally crying with laughter. "The cow let out a startled 'moo!' and flopped onto its side." I died at that line. Died.


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 09/01/06 - 04:36PM Title: Stove Fire

great chapter!! i can't wait for more.


Reviewer: AmyA Anonymous Date: 08/30/06 - 06:27PM Title: Stove Fire

I loved the dream scene and was thinking if he heard her say i love you maybe the kissing was real too? I loved the whole chapter and laughed out loud at the situation they're now in, lol. xxx


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 08/30/06 - 04:48PM Title: Stove Fire

hahahahahaha!  this time i laughed out loud at work and everyone looked at me like i was insane!  this should prove to be rather interesting...update again as soon as you can, please!


Reviewer: TiiNyDaNcer xX Signed Date: 08/30/06 - 01:35PM Title: Stove Fire

um. I'm in love with this story k great. that chapter was quite entertaining. and I love that Justin calls her LoHo btw. kudoosssss on another great installment!


Reviewer: Laurencoz Signed Date: 08/30/06 - 12:21AM Title: Stove Fire

I love this chapter! But I was so disappointed when I found out the first part was just a dream. They need to hook up already for real!


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 08/29/06 - 10:00PM Title: Stove Fire

lol. Wow this chapter was certainly eventful. I loved the dream scene... it sounded so real. Lauren must love Justin if she's chanting it in her dream. And I absolutely loved the scene at the Diner. That Truman dude is weird. Great update chica.


Reviewer: CoachTiffany Signed Date: 08/29/06 - 09:25PM Title: Stove Fire

Dreams always mean something :)





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