Reviews For Deranged Delusions
Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 06/10/06 - 11:46PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

great first chapter. I'm completely hooked!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading chelsia! I\'m glad you liked the start of DD! Thank you for checking it out :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 11:18PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

Okay she needs to step up, tell him to shut the hell up, and just him in his freaking place. Oh please let her do the next chapter. He won't fire her; I think that he's just talk. Uh, he even frustrated me. please update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Thanks Nikki for checking out this story! She might tell Justin off...he\'s so much fun to make him an ass! Most of the stories out there don\'t really do that but I\'m glad people are liking it instead of saying \'How can you make him that mean?\' But thank you so much for the review and the feedback and for checking out this story! I\'m glad you liked it :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 09:36PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

So, I really like the story...as I told ya on the MB...Dude is Justin a douche or what? Jeeeez...I kinda wished Lauren had told his ass off! haha Great start and I can't wait t read more! yay!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review Sarah! And another thanks for your feedback on the MB. I\'m glad you like it and yeah, Justin is kind of a douche isn\'t he? But its a nice contrast from sweet Justin that you see in Unspeakable and Unbreakable. I\'m glad you like it though! - Amanda


Reviewer: Courtney(ialwayzbesingin) Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 04:36PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

I'm in love. I love the way you portray Justin Trace and Lauren. Truley realistic and you had me laughing.  Keep going, I love it so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback Courtney! I\'m so glad you\'re liking the story so far and thanks for the feedback on Justin, Trace, and Laurens\' portrayals. I\'m glad I could make you laugh, sometimes I think I don\'t have enough humor but I guess I do! Lol! Thank you again and an update coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 06/10/06 - 02:55PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

nice...i like it a lot!  can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you alimera! I\'m so glad you liked it. Update coming soon! Thanks again! - Amanda


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 06/10/06 - 01:04PM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

YAY! So happy you posted the story! Wooh! Justin is such a DOUCHEBAG! God, if I was Lauren, I would be planting cockroaches in his toilet or something. lol. But hey. Lauren just went way up in my book for loving Queen. Best. Band. In. The. World. And Under Pressure is pretty much the most awesome song ever. YAY Lauren for having great taste! *favorites*


Author's Response: Okay seriously, Queen is my most favoritest rock band ever. Like I can\'t even describe how much I love them. I always put a little bit of myself into each of the characters and that was the bit I put into Lauren. I\'m so glad you liked the opening chapter! I should have an update coming up within the week! Thanks so much for the review and your input on the boards! Did you get my email that I sent you a while back? Lemme know! - Amanda


Reviewer: vessy Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 06:57AM Title: Just Around the Java Bend

i like its so far, i can't wait for more. and i hope lauren and JT will have something ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review vessy! I\'m so glad you liked the opening chapter and I should have an update coming up soon. Lauren and Justin may have something, I don\'t know though...it depends on where they want to go as Lauren pretty much as a mind of her own. As does Justin lol! But thank you so much for the review! - Amanda





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