Reviews For Deranged Delusions
Reviewer: CoachTiffany Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 04:16PM Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads

I definitely think they should just be together and live happily ever after...or she should have at least not actually been asleep when he was talking...can't wait for the next chapter!


Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 03:29PM Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads

Wow!!!! Great chapter. Update as soon as you can please. I can't wait to read what happens next..


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 02:24PM Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads

i love it. can't wait for more.


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 01:31PM Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads

Pssh, Jess, I am so the best guinnea pig. *sticks out tongue* Anywho, at first I was all excited cuz there was a new chapter, and then I was sad because I'd already read it. But I read it anyway because I'm a dork with too much time on my hands, and that last bit you added made me happy. So, you have approximately 1 chapter to make Justin and Amanda get together before I whine and cry and be obnoxious. Because I'm nice like that. *nods*


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 01:12PM Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads

Okay, well first of all, I don't know who your other guinea pigs are, but I do know I'm one of them...the best one...cus I'm the shit. LMAO. *snort* Anyways, I'm soo glad that you added some more after I told you to proceed on past the this is gonna blow part. The cuteness and Justin talking to Lauren was perfect. LOVE LOVED it, bitch. I'm proud of you. That chapter was fucking awesome--the suspense, the emotion. Whoo, goo Manda. Now you and I need to have a serious chat about the future of this story and what's gonna happen, cus you know I gotta keep your ass in check about the happiness/cuteness factor. If you try to bring any destruction or unhappiness to their lives, you will deal with me. ;) Don't forget that, and as always, I'm not afraid to call/text your ass with some major MIXED bitch attitude.

 

Got me bitch?

 

Also stop being a fucking lazy ass LPS. I want an author's response to this shit you fucking understand me? lmfao. Good. Glad...glad we got that settled. Aren't you?

 

Mmm, can I fuck Justin? (Sorry I just had to add this random thing in....he's so FINE! what what!) 


Reviewer: Thuggist Signed Date: 09/16/06 - 02:39AM Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For

Oh, my god. MORE, please. Pretty please with a cherry on top? This is too good for words


Reviewer: lauren Anonymous Date: 09/16/06 - 01:55AM Title: You've Got a Foe in Me

this chapter.. is so heart wrenching.. i feel so bad for lauren.. i actually cried


Reviewer: lauren Anonymous Date: 09/16/06 - 01:54AM Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For

OMG!!! i'm loving it so much!


Reviewer: TiiNyDaNcer xX Signed Date: 09/15/06 - 10:51PM Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For

i want to have Lauren's job. I don't care that Justin's a douche, I want that to be my life hahaha


Reviewer: Thuggist Signed Date: 09/15/06 - 07:59PM Title: Stay With Me

I almost cried. :[





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