Reviewer: CoachTiffany
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Date: 09/18/06 - 04:16PM
Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads
I definitely think they should just be together and live happily ever after...or she should have at least not actually been asleep when he was talking...can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
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Date: 09/18/06 - 03:29PM
Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads
Wow!!!! Great chapter. Update as soon as you can please. I can't wait to read what happens next..
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 09/18/06 - 02:24PM
Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads
i love it. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lroberts
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Date: 09/18/06 - 01:31PM
Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads
Pssh, Jess, I am so the best guinnea pig. *sticks out tongue* Anywho, at first I was all excited cuz there was a new chapter, and then I was sad because I'd already read it. But I read it anyway because I'm a dork with too much time on my hands, and that last bit you added made me happy. So, you have approximately 1 chapter to make Justin and Amanda get together before I whine and cry and be obnoxious. Because I'm nice like that. *nods*
Reviewer: glitter15
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Date: 09/18/06 - 01:12PM
Title: And He Shall Smite the Crackheads
Okay, well first of all, I don't know who your other guinea pigs are, but I do know I'm one of them...the best one...cus I'm the shit. LMAO. *snort* Anyways, I'm soo glad that you added some more after I told you to proceed on past the this is gonna blow part. The cuteness and Justin talking to Lauren was perfect. LOVE LOVED it, bitch. I'm proud of you. That chapter was fucking awesome--the suspense, the emotion. Whoo, goo Manda. Now you and I need to have a serious chat about the future of this story and what's gonna happen, cus you know I gotta keep your ass in check about the happiness/cuteness factor. If you try to bring any destruction or unhappiness to their lives, you will deal with me. ;) Don't forget that, and as always, I'm not afraid to call/text your ass with some major MIXED bitch attitude. Got me bitch? Also stop being a fucking lazy ass LPS. I want an author's response to this shit you fucking understand me? lmfao. Good. Glad...glad we got that settled. Aren't you? Mmm, can I fuck Justin? (Sorry I just had to add this random thing in....he's so FINE! what what!)
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/16/06 - 02:39AM
Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For
Oh, my god. MORE, please. Pretty please with a cherry on top? This is too good for words
Reviewer: lauren
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/06 - 01:55AM
Title: You've Got a Foe in Me
this chapter.. is so heart wrenching.. i feel so bad for lauren.. i actually cried
Reviewer: lauren
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/06 - 01:54AM
Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For
OMG!!! i'm loving it so much!
Reviewer: TiiNyDaNcer xX
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Date: 09/15/06 - 10:51PM
Title: A Girl Worth Fighting For
i want to have Lauren's job. I don't care that Justin's a douche, I want that to be my life hahaha
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 07:59PM
Title: Stay With Me
I almost cried. :[
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