Author's Response: Thank you for the review it made me cry writing it I\'ve read so many JC fan fictions and I\'m going to try write about him as much as possible if u like this story check out my first fan fiction about JC it\'s called I\'ll Never Let You Go it\'s my favorite one I have written.
This would be a lot easier to read if there were more than just a few sentences and the paragraphs were separated. As it is right now, it just looks like words on a page without any coherency in them.
Author's Response: Thanks for heads up well I fixed my mistakes sorry for the many mistakes I made I typed it when I was really sleepy.