Reviewer: stimbleSignedDate: 01/01/06 - 11:02PM
Title: She's Not Worth It
First: those people below me where so wrong... Second the dialoge is just off....what they say doesn't flow right and it sounds awkward. Even in plays there are directions to how a person says something and all the good stuff...so yeah
Reviewer: ??
AnonymousDate: 07/03/04 - 11:57PM
Title: She's Not Worth It
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
BTW...it's called freedom of speech, baby!.
Author's Response: i didnt want him to say anything but obviously he didnt listen. This really wasnt a 'story' persay it was a quote "play" I had to do for my writing class and thats just the way it came out if u didnt like it then u didnt like it....simple as that....
Reviewer: no one
AnonymousDate: 07/02/04 - 11:01PM
Title: She's Not Worth It
that was the stupidest thing I have ever read! girl you need to take another writing class or something, that totally sucked! omg....I can't believe u even had the guts to post that! who ever told u that u were a good writer completely lied to you! For ur sake and for everyone esle's sake on this site...please do NOT post anymore stories!!
Author's Response: if you are going to speak rudly here you do not need to come back and by the way sshe is not writing this her future husband is so do not saay anything again.
