Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 12:47PM Title: *Sob*

I loved this for many reasons, some of which I'll bore you with now: Justin as a sufferer of autism? Very original, creative and new. I honestly don't know too much about it, but judging by Justin's character I can firmly say that I find it an endearing quality rather than a disease. His attention to detail and smallest things was just adorable and made his character very well rounded. Another thing I liked was my surprisingly intense outrage at Keisha, perhaps I just wasn't expecting it. But then, I suppose that is something which could very likely happen to someone like Justin in that situation, which just further pissed me off. I'm surprised/appalled that the story is finished, but I can see that this is just one chapter of Justin's life and I cannot WAIT to read the next (hopefully more happy and Keisha-less) one. Oops, I'm rambling now. I'm not going to read what I've written in this review because it's probably crap (ha ha--"probably") but that's good in a way, because now you know my true sentiments about the story! Well done!

Author's Response: Your review was not in the slightest bit crap, I really do appreciate it, and all the other reviews you have been so kind to give. "I can firmly say that I find it an endearing quality rather than a disease." I'm SO glad you said that because it's EXACTLY what I was trying to get across. YAY! I'm glad you got so into the story, and found the character of Justin so rounded, those really are great compliments and I appreciate it. Thanks for your support!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 12:40PM Title: Letter to Keisha

Ouch Justin, very ouch. That's harsh, but I suppose Keisha deserved it and I'm going to give Justin the benefit of the doubt and presume he's only acting out because of Keisha's whorish and slutty behavior. But I think Justin will forgive her eventually, after all he's too cute and nice to stay mad for long.

Author's Response: Very true, bless his little cotton socks


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 12:38PM Title: Letter to Kamal

Because Justin has been the bigger man here, as he said, I'll say it for him: Kamal, you're a complete asshole and let's face it, you've got a crap name. Okay, onto next chapter!

Author's Response: LOL!


Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 11:06AM Title: *Sob*

I loved this story, i hope you add another series soon. You did a good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Don't know when the next part comes but it could be soon


Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 11:03AM Title: Letter to Kamal

That was good,' P.s. Everyone knew you stole that bagel' That was funny.

Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you for the review


Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 05/30/05 - 11:01AM Title: None

That was good.


Reviewer: Timberlake Anonymous Date: 05/29/05 - 12:53PM Title: None

OKAY! I'm going to reread soon.


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 05/29/05 - 10:42AM Title: None

*does a Smithers impression* Eeeeeexxxcelent. But, Helena, I don't WANT to read a substantial amount of text. I WANT AN UPDATE NOW!!! *pouts*


Reviewer: Teeny Signed Date: 05/29/05 - 10:07AM Title: None

Yay! Love it love it loooove it....love it love it looove it...love...I'm sorry, but you get the idea, yes? lol


Reviewer: Paige Anonymous Date: 05/24/05 - 07:50AM Title: Sixteen

Stealing bagels IS wrong. It starts with a bagel and then ends with a girlfriend, lol. I'm glad Kamal and Keisha got what was coming to them. Dirty whores!

Author's Response: Lol! I guess it's a good thing I don't like bagels anyway. Thanks for the review my dearest!





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