Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 04/02/05 - 09:25AM Title: Fifteen

that was a good update. i hope justin finds a nice girl that treats him right.

Author's Response: I do too, he certainly deserves it. Thanks for the review


Reviewer: Paige Anonymous Date: 03/30/05 - 02:29PM Title: Fourteen

BOOOOOOOOOO! Boo Keisha, just boo, boo, boo. She's an evil woman for doing that to Justin. And saying that she felt sorry for him .... ugh, just drive the nail in a little further. I hope he can move on and find a better girlfriend.

Author's Response: So do I, actually I'm quite taken with him myself, do you think I have a chance? Lol. Thanks for the review my dear


Reviewer: lroberts Signed Date: 03/23/05 - 11:03PM Title: One

I am finally lifting my lazy but and reviewing. Let's see. Keisha is a poophead, Justin is a sweetie, and I want to shove that stolen bagel up that guy's nose. I think that about covers it. lol

Author's Response: Lol, nice summary Laurie. And thanks for the review!


Reviewer: lilD Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 11:11PM Title: Fourteen

Poor Justin! : (

Author's Response: Hes certainly had a tough time. Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 02:24PM Title: Fourteen

Damn her! Keisha is a first class bitch how dare she do that. Now she's caused him to runaway from home oh no!

Author's Response: Hopefully in the next few chapters you should begin to see how Keisha really is, as opposed to how Justin chose to see her and things should get more interesting. Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 01:12PM Title: Fourteen

Damn that Keisha!!!! Damn her to...somewhere really, really, really, really bad!!!!!! How dare she, and Kamal!

Author's Response: Lol! Yes, she really was rather mean stringing him along wasn't she? Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: sarahj Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 09:55AM Title: Fourteen

Keisha.....what are you doing!! Why would anyone in their right mind cheat on Jusitn! I HATE this Kamal guy. And Justin....you can do better than Keisha, she shouldn't have done that to you! Great update ;)

Author's Response: I know! And I think I love my Justin a little more than the real one (who I would never cheat on anyway) so Keisha really is out of her mind lol. Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: lola Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 09:34AM Title: Fourteen

That was so mean of her. i feel sorry for Justin, he treated her so good. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the update, I'll try update soon

Author's Response: *Thanks for the REVIEW lol. Silly me


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 09:09AM Title: Fourteen

That's stupid BITCH! What the fu-...hell...is she doing? How could she do that to Justin? Ugh, sorry, I have no other words, all I can think is BITCH! LOL Perhaps later, when I've calmed down, I'll have more intelligent thoughts, but for now...I wish bad things upon Keisha and Kamal

Author's Response: LOL! Is it wrong that I like that you're all wound up now? Lol. Is this a good enough update to make up for your false hope last time? I hope so lol. Thanks for your review my dear!


Reviewer: Ruthy Anonymous Date: 03/16/05 - 08:33AM Title: Two

Hey Helena, I just started reading this... I love it! The end bit of this chapter about the stealing bread reminds me of Amelie... I love that film. You should watch it! It also reminds me of those new adverts where that woman is procrastinating over whether or not to eat those chocolates!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my stories Ruthy, you rock! Seriously. I very much appreciate it. As for the Amelie similarites... I never thought of it like that, but you're right. I love that film too, I have it on DVD>





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