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Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 04/09/05 - 04:23PM
Title: Fifteen
I hate that he's beating himself up over this whole Keisha situation, but getting hurt in the heart department sucks, so it all makes sense!
I like his idea of getting away from it all, but he needs to at least let his parents know what's going on. I'm sure they're worried sick with him just taking off.
I'll take him to Disney World. It'd be my pleasure.
Author's Response: I'd take him anywhere lol, all he has to do is ask. The best place to take him would be my bedroom methinks... Thanks for the review honey!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 04/04/05 - 06:00AM
Title: Fifteen
That's the attitude Justin--screw Keisha and Kamal, keep on riding your bike, throw on a pair of mouse ears aaannndd...you're ready for Disney world! lol I hope everyone is worried about him and Keisha feels like shit because, after all, it is HER FAULT! I know, I know, I'm a bitch, and I don't feel Keisha and Kamal have gotten theirs yet!
Author's Response: Anger management might be a good idea. Just kidding lol, I'm glad you're getting so involved in the story
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 04/02/05 - 02:13PM
Title: Fifteen
DisneyWorld? DisneyWorld? Justin Randall Timberlake, I demand you to go back home this instant! Screw Kiesha and Kamal, the bastards. She's so terrible, breaking his precious heart like that. I'll love you Justin! LOL
Author's Response: You'd have to fight me for him first though lol, so grrrrrrrr! And whats wrong with DisneyWorld? Thanks for the reviews my dear!
Reviewer: sarahj
Anonymous
Date: 04/02/05 - 12:01PM
Title: Fifteen
He's going to Disney World! Where else would you go at a time of trouble? Great update...I say, forget Keisha, look for comfort in Mickey ;)
Author's Response: Lol, very good idea of his wasn't it? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 04/02/05 - 11:37AM
Title: Fifteen
Hoo boy. Justin at Disneyland? This should be interesting. One question. You keep on using commas where there should be periods or semi colons. Are you doing that to portray that Justin's train of thought is somewhat dissorganized, or are those just grammatical mistakes? Good update though.
Author's Response: Lol, I can write normally I swear! It seems to come through whenever I slip into the Justin character's mind, I think thats probably just one of his quirks lol. Thanks for the review Laurie!
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 04/02/05 - 09:25AM
Title: Fifteen
that was a good update. i hope justin finds a nice girl that treats him right.
Author's Response: I do too, he certainly deserves it. Thanks for the review
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