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Reviewer: Sindi
Signed
Date: 06/29/06 - 11:45AM
Title: Chapter Three
Aww, that was so sad. But still a very happy ending. Really good short story.
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 01/24/05 - 07:49AM
Title: Chapter One
Great story. However, one question. What was the name of the coffee shop? Little Hole In The Wall?
Author's Response: I have no idea, I suppose it could be called that though.
Reviewer: Meg
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/05 - 02:58PM
Title: Chapter Three
Awww Helena that was too sad!
I loved the use of lyrics too:)
Really liked the way you wrote this story, really descriptive. But yeah was a sad ending
Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 03:56PM
Title: Chapter Three
That was a great mixture of songs used in the story. I really enjoyed how the lyrics reinforced the tone and meaning of the words.
What a sad situation to have to face. And he wanted to die with her ... :cry: :cry: Very Romeo and Juliet!!
Great job, Helena. You know I love song-based stories.
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