Reviewer: whitney
Anonymous
Date: 05/25/05 - 04:21PM
Title: Peach Cobbler and My Boo
nice..id love to see a sequel..marriage/wedding planning,,loosing the 'v-card'
Author's Response: *lol* Yea, I'm working on that as I type...well, not EXACTLY as I type, but ya know what I mean. :o)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/05 - 09:56PM
Title: Grads, Milfs, and Old Fogies
OMG! That was so funny! He's brothers are so cute! But what is up with Lisa?
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :o) She's a step-Monster-in law. *lol* She doesn't like Leilani because Justin's family likes her better...which is understandable because Lisa stole a married man; plus when Leilani was younger, she used to call Lisa by "harlot". Oh, and since Lynn doesn't care too much for Lisa, that is another reason for her to ate Leilani, because Lynn simply adores her. I know that's a whole bunch of back info (or whatever it's called), but I'm writing a prequel to this to tie up all the loose ends...no, there won't be any more of "the tape", well actually there will be, just not all of what is on there. Now I'm rambling which is my cue to am-scra. Thanks again! *waves*
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/05 - 09:15PM
Title: It's about to be a what...GIRL FIGHT oh, And Nelly!!!!!
I think someone has Beyonce issues!LOL.
Author's Response: It's not me...honestly!!!! *lol* Hey, I needed someone to act all Diva-ish...and flirt with Justin. So, since her name always falls from folks mouths (like diahrea...cha-cha-cha), I figured why not use her. Plus I think my little nephew really is allergic to it.
Reviewer: Jas
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/05 - 03:41PM
Title: Ooh, It's a Mystery Chapter!!!!!!
Sooooo good!!
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaaaank You very murch!!!!!! Yup, I said "murch". :o)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/01/05 - 08:47PM
Title: Ooh, It's a Mystery Chapter!!!!!!
Aww he finally did it! And she said yes! Trace is crazy.
Author's Response: Yea, it took him long enough! *lol* Gotta love that Ayala...we'll get to see more of him and his craziness towards the end (and in my next "top secret" project).
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/28/05 - 03:07PM
Title: None
Now why you gonna leave us hanging like that!!!
Author's Response: I hafta do it. Maybe it's just the Soap Opera fan in me...either that, or my momma was still reeling from who shot JR when I was born. :o)
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 01/27/05 - 09:35PM
Title: None
I'm not really digging the way the dialogue is set up. Its like an IM convo, not a speaking one. Other then that, its pretty good. I give ya my props.
Author's Response: The reason I right like that is because I was writing a movie one time and there were about 8 people at once. So I kinda got stuck in the routine. Thanks for your feedback. :o)
Author's Response: I meant, there was a scene where 8 people were talking at once. That was the only way I knew how to make the scenes work. Sorry if it becomes bothersome to read. I'm slowly trying to go back to the way stories are written...it's just gets a little hard, since I've been writing like that for about six years now.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/27/05 - 06:04PM
Title: None
And just what did that message say!?
Author's Response: Je ne sais pas. :o)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/27/05 - 05:15PM
Title: None
Aww OMG he is just pulling out the stops.
Author's Response: Yup, her sure is!!!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/04 - 05:43PM
Title: None
Why Cameron had to come and mess things up.
Author's Response: I needed a name that I could use for a joke in the prequel...coming to a computer near you.
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