Reviewer: Joeylance
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 09:46AM
Title: Just Not Good Enough
Excellent work - very angsty and very powerful - you feel for the person so much - you just want yo hug him and tell him that everything will be okay - that he is not worthless - just because he feels that way now - it is not the end of the world
Reviewer: helena
Signed
Date: 03/16/05 - 10:12AM
Title: Just Not Good Enough
Very good poem Audrey. I find it hard enough to make mine rhyme lol, but you've make a really powerful piece which conveys the emotions of the character really well. Great job!
Author's Response: Wow, if this is the same helena from abs, than that's awesome. Thanks for liking my poem man. I only hope that everything that was said (is this is MTVjunkie from abs) in the past about Ashley's story and everything that went on was forgotten. I have, I hope everyone there has too. I jus honestly want to get along with you guys. But sorry, thanks for the review again. :D
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 02/22/05 - 02:46PM
Title: Just Not Good Enough
I loved this! It was very angst-ridden and honest. Powerful stuff, definitely. It really made you feel for the character
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 02/21/05 - 09:25PM
Title: Just Not Good Enough
Wow. That was really powerful. It portrays a message of angst and hurt. Like, what am I gonna do without her. Great. I've added this to my favorites. This is one of your best works. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad u enjoyed it so much to do that. :D
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