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Reviewer: Angel
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/05 - 10:31PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
W-O-W! I just read this story for the first time and I got chills. Justin was an ass! Great short though! Excellent job!
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin was an ass. I'm glad you liked it. I don't know where I came up with the idea since i'm not a mom, but it just seemed like a reasonable character choice. Anyways, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/23/05 - 12:44PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
Excuse me, but it has to be said...what a completely selfish prick! How could he ignore his own MOTHER like that? Honestly, one minute they're momma's boy, the next, its like they don't even know them. Great story, it clearly got me riled up LOL
Author's Response: Stardom does that to you, I guess. But yeah. Justin was a jerk. But I think he was kind of justified (no pun intended) in his action, a little. Lynn was definetly being overprotective. The story was written for that purpose though. To make you think; make you look deeper into relationships. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: xkcfanx
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Date: 03/20/05 - 07:58PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
how rude! lmao.....this was a great story girl i love it =)
Author's Response: *takes a bow* It was nothing! Nothing! lol. I'm here till thursday! thanks for the review, girlie
Reviewer: Airykah Shazay
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Date: 03/20/05 - 04:17PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
GREAT short story! I love how REALISTIC the emotions sounded. And yes, that last line... burn!
Author's Response: Dang, this is turning into my most popular story yet! Thank you! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: peyton
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/05 - 12:43PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
sooo goood, loved it. just one teeny thing....brittany (im assuming spears) is britney**
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And yeah, I didn't think that looked right, but Microsoft Word kept refusing it, so I was like, screw it. lol. Thanks
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/05 - 05:04AM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
Wow. I think the last line just killed me. Thanks Laurie! Lol. Seriously though, FANTASTIC story, very original, thought provoking (and when you make me think thats a minor miracle lol), creative, evokative, perfectly written. You know, all the good stuff. Good work!
Author's Response: Yeah. I liked the llast line too. And thank you very much. I just love it oodles when people complim,ent me like that. lol. Thank you very much for the review/
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/05 - 11:35PM
Title: Mommy Knows Best
That story was amazing. It was so deep. It's good to see a totally different kind of story.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. Seriously, I didn't think it was that good. It sorta just came to me last night. Lol. Thanks again for the review. Totally just boosted my ego a couple notches. LoL
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