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Reviewer: sassy spacey
Anonymous
Date: 03/10/06 - 01:08PM
Title: The beginning of the end
WOW. That was good. I liked it :) awesome job. -Traci
Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 02/11/06 - 04:46AM
Title: The beginning of the end
great story! i really hope u will write some for this story, u can make a really good what happend after with this story so pleaseeeee :)
Reviewer: Nikki
Anonymous
Date: 04/17/05 - 11:45AM
Title: The beginning of the end
Chica, I didn't even know you wrote! *glares at you* All your visits to my site and I have to find out this way *looks away* LOL. I think this was a really strong piece that you've written. I felt the emotion. I'm glad that you didn't make Kayla out to be some criminal. She was in the dark and she was woman enough to admit what was going on once she was able to gather her bearings. Amazing work.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 02:38PM
Title: The beginning of the end
I know that was a short but that was so good I want more.
Author's Response: Well ..Gigi ..I might do something else ..like a 'what happened after' ..but i'm not sure yet. Glad you liked it though. :-)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:33AM
Title: The beginning of the end
God, how horrible for her! Very well written story, and it packed quite a punch. good work!
Author's Response: 'It packed quite a punch'. Haha, I love that. Thanks! It means a lot to me, that you like it.
Reviewer: Elle
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 10:44AM
Title: The beginning of the end
Wow, that was really good. I would've done the same thing had I been Michelle. But I think I might have had to beat his ass before I left. That was a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Elle. I'm glad you liked it so much. I would've done the same thing ..except ..I would've been throwing shit, and hitting him. We would've definitely been fighting.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 06:41AM
Title: The beginning of the end
Ooh, I liked it! I don't know if I could have done what Michelle did. Actually, I know that I couldn't...at least the part where she left, I would've had to be the mess outta him first.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nique! Michelle ..like she was upset, but she acted civilized. But that's the kind of girl she is. And I commend her for that. Seriously ..because most of us girls would've kicked his ass! He so would've deserved that. But i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 06:37AM
Title: The beginning of the end
I loved it, is there more, update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, Lola! No ..at this point in time ..there isn't anymore.
Reviewer: monkeymonkey85
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 05:55AM
Title: The beginning of the end
that took guts. I know that if my husband's ex girl wile we were married showed up and had a child I'd slap him across the face and tell him he is a piece of trash who shouldn't be a live. then walk out. But then again my husband wouldn't be an ass.. sorry good start.. OOO up date soon please thankies
Author's Response: Well ..I feel bad saying this. lolol, But it was only meant to be a short story :-( ...If I get more motivation to write this story, it could possibly turn into a chapter story. But ..I dunno. But i'm so thankful that you liked it and commented on it. It made my day.
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 04:35AM
Title: The beginning of the end
that was sooo good. I mean dude really fucked up now. What even made it worse was that he got the little boy's name wrong! Geez it's bad enough he could care less about him at that moment...but he got the poor little child's name wrong and made the situation worse!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! ..He did. He messed up soo bad. Like ..he already cheated. But he said his own son's name wrong. How horrible can you be. It's like he doesn't even care about that little boy. Tsk, tsk ..Timberlake. But isn't that just like a guy.
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