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Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/05 - 03:09PM
Title: chapter 3
That was sooooooooo HOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTT I love it update soon
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 08:57PM
Title: chapter 3
Hey Teeny it's about to be a what Girl Fight!LOL!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 01:45PM
Title: chapter 3
Can I be Martelle? No, seriously, please? Sexy voice, sexy body, sexy man, LOL Awesome update girly, you STILL have me being nerdy and trying to translate the french sentences!(Um...that's a really weird compliment, by the way lol). Update soooon!
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 06/09/05 - 11:10PM
Title: chapter 1
Ah, I see you changed the name. Good on you. *high fives you because you speak french too* Go us for talking Francais! lol
Reviewer: lroberts
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 08:41PM
Title: chapter 2
YAY! An update! One critique: a lot of your sentances started with He or She. It is very repetetive. Try putting in verbs and such. Otherwise, great!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 07:29PM
Title: chapter 2
LOL! Well, excuse me, Miss. Thang! LOL She went right to business! LOL. This is HOT!!!!!! Update soon!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 06:19PM
Title: chapter 2
DAYUM.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 03:34PM
Title: chapter 2
DAMN THAT WAS HOT! And no Martelle is not shy at all is she.
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 02:57PM
Title: chapter 2
That was HOT!!!!!!!!!! Martelle is not shy at all. Love tihs story, update soon. Can't wait to see what happens at dinner.
Reviewer: tasha
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 02:47PM
Title: chapter 2
that was good i can't wait to see what will happen next for them .it's hot as hell in my house and reading that didn't help
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