Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/31/05 - 02:35PM
Title: chapter 1
Ooh, kinky voyeurism! Those crazy French people...and Justin. *lol* More, I need more! I heart all of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you :). I'm trying to write the next chapter so I'll try to get it up as soon as I can.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/05 - 07:12PM
Title: chapter 1
I must say, that was hot! I liked it, loved it, would've helped Justin out, if you know what I mean. Very interesting. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you madome. Hopefully, I'll get something out soon.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/05 - 02:05AM
Title: chapter 1
This is what I want to know how is Cameron gonna throw him out of his own house!? But it's so funny that he got so frustrated he had to leave the country.lol.
Reviewer: Drea
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/05 - 07:52PM
Title: chapter 1
New interesting stories!!!yay
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/05 - 01:14PM
Title: chapter 1
Sorry I haven't been replying to ANY stories lately. I know shame on me. But I have got to say, "That was fucking hot!!!"
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 05/29/05 - 01:00PM
Title: chapter 1
I like Justin as a horny fuck, don't you?
Yes. Very much so. lol
Reviewer: lroberts
Signed
Date: 05/29/05 - 11:20AM
Title: chapter 1
Okay, I'm taking french II, but I still have no idea what the heck that sign said. Maybe I'm not so good at French... Anyway, there were between a lot and a little spelling and gramtical errors, but the overall chapter was pretty good. This is what I've gathered so far: Cameron is a bitch, Justin is a little bit wistful as far as his relationship, Justin is one rich dude, and Justin is a horny fuck. Sound about right? Good. I'll be waiting for an update, mon ami. Hee hee. Maybe I'm not so bad?
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not so great in catching all of my mistakes when I read over my stuff. I should get an editor... anyway, I'm going into French 5 next year, and I'm not so great either :) I used the french translator at dictionary.com so it probably doesn't make any sense but I can't find my french book so... yeah. I like Justin as a horny fuck, don't you? LOL
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/05 - 10:31AM
Title: chapter 1
I love it so far, update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to read it :)
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/05 - 09:59AM
Title: chapter 1
Oh, I love this! The French name got me from the second I saw it (I THINK I can speak French, but I can't really lol) so I had to read it, and it was great. Justin's sudden uprooting himself to France was enough excitement for me but then that little thing on the balcony....very hot! lol Loved it =)
Author's Response: Thank you my darlin'! Hopefully, I won't let you down in future chapters.
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/05 - 09:44AM
Title: chapter 1
i really like this so far (being completely obsessed with French and France, of course)... at first, i was tempted to say this was too idealistic a story; he goes to france, spur of the moment, finds a house that he loves, buys it, and then it's magically stocked with everything he could possibly need. then i thought about it, and realized that this is what i've really been missing from a lot of fanfics; the mythical, fantasy-like world that stories are supposed to represent. like a spin on "reality." so with that said, i really like your story. elle est bonne et j'attends le chapitre prochain.
Author's Response: I got the idea from the movie The Swimming Pool, have you seen it? It's really about an English writer who goes to France to stay at her editor's home for the summer and she meets his daughter. The daughter is really wild and very, very sexual and it just set off a bunch of ideas in my head. I glad you like it though :)
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