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Reviewer: Martina
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/06 - 07:03PM
Title: How Come, How Long?
The story was good, but also dark. I like how you give Justin a mean side. It was relly good!
Reviewer: Martina
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/06 - 07:02PM
Title: How Come, How Long?
The story was good, but also dark. I like how you give Justin a mean side. It was relly good!
Reviewer: Martina
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/06 - 07:02PM
Title: How Come, How Long?
The story was good, but also dark. I like how you give Justin a mean side. It was relly good!
Reviewer: Sindi
Signed
Date: 06/26/06 - 03:13PM
Title: How Come, How Long?
Oh no. Edrea you should've left him when you had the chance I loved this ending.
Reviewer: Frankie
Anonymous
Date: 12/16/05 - 07:26AM
Title: How Come, How Long?
...Okay so what I said about at least he didn't cheat on her. . .guess I was wrong. And damn Justin. How the hell did he get out of that one? He killed her. . .all right so she lost her balance or whatever, but it's his fault! He just let go of her. Stupid Justin. And JC! I understand that he wanted her to make the decision to leave Justin herself. . .but he knew what was happening right? He could have done something. Stupid him. I'm mad at them both now. Stupid boys. And back to the note of pronouncing her name. . .is it Ed-rea? Coz JC called her Ed and all. Anyway, again even though it was a sad one. . .I still loved it! You're an awesome writer! But after reading two of your short stories I'm beginning to wonder if any of them end with happily-ever-afters? Hmm? *goes off to investigate*
Author's Response: Yes, it's Ed-rea. Like Ed and Andrea put together. Haha. I read it in a book somewhere once. I don't remember where. And as for happy endings...I don't really like writing them, and I don't think any of the short stories have them (that I can think of). But some of the longer ones are a bit less depressing. lol Thanks for the reviews!
Reviewer: Oh!
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/05 - 07:44PM
Title: How Come, How Long?
ooooooooooo i can't believe him! then he's gonna run down talkin bout ooo baby i'm sorry 2 stinkin late for that now buddy!
Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 05/28/04 - 07:23AM
Title: How Come, How Long?
omg ... wow
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