ok, a little confused there at the end. had her lover sent her the daffodils? are they like her favorite? is there more to this or is it just a capture? my inquiring mind wants to know. honestly, this is good. i love the way she describes him and the night. i could see them sitting together in my mind. and i totally agree that perfect is a state of mind. it holds a different meaning for each person. i thought the whole bit about perfection was brilliant :)

Author's Response: thank you very much.. and about the end you see i got the daffodils from the song "lose myself" (schizophrenic) the first line from the song says "she loves daffodils." so yes. her lover sent her daffodils. for now this is just a capture but i am thinking about adding more. thanks so much for the review!