I think it's pretty good, but it's really short and there are a bunch of mistakes. Like it says "eye bowel" instead of I'm guessing eye brow? Other than that though, I think you've got a good start and I liked the couch thing about the queer eye guys crying over it.

Author's Response: I've been out of the Nsync Fiction scene for so long i used to be on NsyncWorld.com but since that shut down i havn't had the time or place to write. This was my frist in a long time wrting, so i guess i'm really rusty...but thanks and I'll try to make it longer next time!