Working at the rec. center wasn't tough. Working alongside your ex at the rec. center was. Especially when you might of wanted your ex back. And especially when you think there's no real way of working it out between the two of you.
So why do I get the feeling that this lovely story is based on what you and I have been talking about? Haha, I love it girlie (and you know what's even funnier, I had a guy friend call me "Breezy" and I HATED it-haha). Good job love and update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, B, I'm psychic! I came up with that nickname with out evening knowing this information! And, I'm glad you like the story. You damn well should, I named the girl after you and all! Bwuahah. Love ya! :P
I had sex with Justin...*sigh* What was I thinking? Hell, at least it was good sex! Haha, I'm just kidding. I liked how everything built up in this chapter and then went so crazy and fast afterward. Good job love, can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: LMAO, I love how you refer to Breezy as \"I\" now B. Man, I miss your bitch ass! I keep missing your im\'s. Grr. I\'m glad you liked this chapter, I was kinda worried it sucked. LOL.
Haha, I thought it was great (especially the ending line). Very good job for a first attempt!
Author's Response: HEY! thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it. Glad you liked it!! (im kind of on a Justin high from cruising through JTPC LOL...shhhhhhh, dont tell anyone;)
That was real sexy and delicious! Great job, I loved it!
Author's Response: :-D. So gald you enjoyed what my twisted imagination had to offer. Thanks a lot for the review girl. :)
(Song by: Rhianna feat Ne-yo - Hate that I Love You)
That was awesome and very emotion packed. Great job girl!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really glad you like it. A lot of stuff I write I haven't posted and I'm afraid to share because not everyone will like it but I'm glad people liked this one. You're awesome girl, and I just started reading your shorts so expect some comments. :). I just haven't had enough time to sit and catch up on all the stories I'm reading. hehe. Thanks for the review.
*For Candy Coated Writing Challenge*
Justin reads something private in his daughters diary.
That was awesome and so different than other stories that I've read before. Please tell me you are adding more to this! Good job!
Wow, that was...hot. I think this could be the start of a really great chapter story (if you wanted to write one). Great job!
Who would have thought ‘that day' was the beginning of the end for us? That was the first time in my life I wished I wasn't Justin Timberlake, having to endure the grief of losing the love of my life and everything I held dear to my heart in our relationship all because of an entry in her diary...
* Written for the Sugar Shack Challenge at Tasting-Eden.com *
What is with the sad stories/chapter updates today? (haha). That made my heart hurt it was so sad. But it was a great little story. Good job girl!
Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry Bri, I know it had a lot of angst but that's what I was going for. :). Still glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the support girl. I appreciate it.
In a world of eroticism, Diane Blossom is one of the most sought after ecdysiasts. She’s a performer, entertainer and mother. Her job description is anything but appealing and her employer is none other than the ruthless hotshot Justin Timberlake himself. He however, is anything but kind and pleasant. Wanting out of this life is Diane’s main goal, not just for herself but for the younger life she is responsible for. However, finding a way out would prove to be more challenging and dangerous than she thought. And it’s all because she ended up meeting him on the job…
D, I'm feeling this story girl! It is different and a little crazy, but definitely in a good way. I love how you used that J. Holiday song too (that's my cut! Haha). Good job and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey bri! Hehe...I'm really glad you decided to jump on the deranged Justin train. haha. It's a challenge but a blast writing his crazy ass. lol. And you know I'm just in love with J holiday's voice plus he's cute too. besides, that song was perfect for the theme. Hehe. I'm so happy you like it. More is on the way. Thanks for reviewing :)
Ok, WTF is going on with this dude? He is straight trippin'. But I'm glad that he felt that he could show his sensitive side to Di and cry in front of her. Now all I want to know is why he's apologizing like that; like is there more than apologizing for Ronnie? Great update girl, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: A lot is going on with him. Well psychologically anyway. hehe. I think Di is maybe his only weakness right now. :D. And the apologizing part, well yeah it's hard to read between the lines as to why he was apologizing so much but I can tell u it wasn't only for Ronnie. hehe. Don't worry. It will make sense soon why he's like that. So glad you liked it bri. I'll update soon.
D, this is getting good girl. The part with Justin spending time with Courtney melted my heart, it was so sweet. But I know he's crazy, so I'm not expecting that for long. Keep it up girl, love it!
Author's Response: Yeah Justin is softening up to his daughter but you are so right about him being crazy. as you know he is unstable so don't expect to see only his nice side. tehehehe. Thanks for the review more is on the way. :)
Jesus D, that was an update. Wow, Justin is really fucked up, but now I understand why. OMFG, when his first girlfriend and daughter were killed...that was awful! But why does he treat Courtney like that if he never had a daughter to begin with? Great and hella deep update girl.
Author's Response: Aww man...I know, I know. *sigh* :(. He treats Court like that because everytime he sees her he remembers his little girl and you know...it's like haunting him and stuff. Don't worry you'll see in the next update with Diane's pov. :). So glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for reviewing.
I knew it! I had a feeling that JC was into something dirty like that! Good thing Justin refused, but now I'm worried for Diane and Courtney because that Grant dude sounded real crazy. Great update girlie, keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah...I didn't want to like shock everyone so I made sure to lay out the hints along the way. hehehe. But, there is still some more to go so I might have a few tricks up my sleeve. hehe. We'll see how things turn out right? I'll update soon. Thanks for commenting girl.
Girl, this is getting crazy. Like I feel something bad is about to go down, but hopefully it will be for the greater good of Justin, Court, and Diane and that they'll come out ok. Love this story girlie and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Why whatever are you talking about Bri? Hehe. Well, what I have in store for my characters should just round up this little story and put the icing on the cake all together right? But that's not coming just yet. hehe. I'm happy you're loving the story since it's different and I'll try to get an update in soon so I don't leave you all hanging too long. Thanks for commenting, you know I love your reviews. :)
Whoa...he said the "L" word. That's crazy and hella deep, but I'm glad he got it out. I almost feel bad for Justin with Diane leaving like that, but I'm hoping it's for the best. Just wow on the chapter D, great job girlie.
Author's Response: I know right. I was drilling on how and when to let him get it out and that time seemed the best time. it put a little edge and a spin on the drama, because after he blurts it out, they'll eventually have to face it and discuss it. hehe. Yeah, her leaving was what she thought was her only option else she's just be stuck in the same thing with Justin over and over again not knowing what's going to happen. I can't say it's for the best, but i can say it's supposed to be in the story. hehe. Glad you liked it girl and thanks.
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