There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21
where is my update?
Author's Response:
you just got it!
hahaha, Steven interrupting the grown up time. This chapter was so sweet! And I'm glad that Sash is becoming comfortable with JT and his life.
Great update!
Uh oh..... i'm predicting some shit is about to go down! i just have a feeling that jess is about to pull some sneaky shit, lol. I love this freakin' story Mari, you have to update more often! :)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! WHY IN THE HELL WOULD HE DO THAT?!!!
Just when Sash was starting to let her guard down and start following her heart, he goes and pulls this shit. And that fight was soooo stupid! Why he would think that she meant what she said? I am just so.... pissed off right now, lol.
You have to update a.s.a.p. and fix this shit Mari!!! FIX IT NOW!!!
first of all, thank you for updating so quickly, lol.
second of all, she's having a baby!!! I loved the last line of this chapter, her smiling at the thought of tiny fingers and toes... so cute. But i'm a little worried, Sash is really hurt and its going to take a lot to get them back on track. I hope they just take their time and not rush into anything just because she's pregnant.
AMAZING UPDATE Mari! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: it will take a lot to get back on track...IF they EVER get back on track ;) lol
if they EVER get back on track?! you are RUDE, lol.
Author's Response: lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you know i have to keep y'all waiting. sometimes in life, things just don't work out... sometimes they do. we'll see lol
i knew it!! i just knew he was gonna move to philly, i'm so excited!!! can't wait for the next update.
did you get my email?
you're right, that was hella awkward. I don't like them like this, they just need to get back together and raise that precious baby!!
this chapter was amazing, try not to wait so long to update again!!
oh my god! I love this story! I was reading it when it was on the old archive! I'm glad to see that you posted it here, hope you update it soon :)
Written for the Drama Queen Challenge (I hope I'm doing this right)
Option A: The One I Gave My Heart To – Aaliyah
that was great but really, really sad, lol. i'm glad to see that you are entering the challenge, good luck! And again, that was great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should have warned about how sad it is haha.
She sat at the foot of the bed, biting her bottom lip and looking up at me. She offered a sweet smile but it was killing me. I haven’t been home in six months and it’s awkward, it’s not supposed to be awkward. “I’m really proud of you.”
“I know,” I answered quickly; she’s said it a hundred times. I know she means well, but I don’t think the fact that I just finished a six-month detox and rehab program is anything to be proud of. It’s something that I should be ashamed of, or at least the fact that I was taking heroine in the first place.
I really suck at summaries haha I have no idea what to write for this one ;) I wrote it for a challenge so I figured I'd post it on up.
something bad is going to happen and it's all her fault! you can't wish bad things on people, especially your little sister and her husband. great job tho, i can't wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: Seriously, she doesn't exactly win the sister of the year award haha. Thanks for reading!
Not cool JT, not cool at all! How is he gonna do heroine at his son's birthday party?! That pisses me off. And, I'm not liking the fact the Lyric is two and isn't talking yet, its making me think that he has a development problem but I could be over analyzing things, lol.
Great update, I can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking it.
And when you're out there without a care
Yeah, I was out of touch
But it wasn't because I didn't know enough
I just knew too much.
- CrazyGnarls Barkley
Damn, JT's got major issues in this one, lol. I like it so far though, I wanna see why he's so freaking crazy. Update soon!
She had him at hello... He had her at goodbye.So, this story is really damn good! LOL. You never cease to amaze me Ash, congrats! I could use a little uh... still dirrty updation as well... :)
Glad to see you back girl!
*Sequel to Crossing Paths* True love has finally prevailed for Cat and Justin, but that was just the first step in their mismatched relationship...yay! i love this story and i'm so glad to see you back!
I loved this chapter and I'm really glad to see that Cat is trying to be adult and really face their issues. She's right when she says that you can't just forget about the past. If they want to be strong and back together, they need to face their past issues so they don't resurface in the future.
Amazing update, give us more soon :)
Author's Response: Brittany! Yay! My heart genuinely leapt when I saw this review. You're so right, Cat and Justin need to use all of their mistakes and try to find some positives in not making the same mistakes again...but they're stubborn asses so who knows if they have the ability to turn their failures into something useful. I really hope you liked the next chapter as much as I liked reading this review. Thanks!
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