Penname: silentm [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: Apr 14, 2007
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This was originally intended to be a short story, but someone sparked my creative side and I'm going to expand.

How can he save her when the thing that's breaking her down is in her mind



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 28009 - Hits: 39807
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 22, 2007 - Last Updated: Jun 28, 2007 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jun 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Oh, nicely done! Very romantic.

Author's Response: thanks :)  I wanted a cute way to end it and I thought this was fitting.  I can't believe it's over, but I've loved every minute of it.  Thanks for the feedback!

He lost her because he was to afraid to admit his true feelings.  And a year and a half later when he runs into her again he's devistated to find that she's moved on with her life.  But will JC accept defeat and try to move on with his life?  Or will he listen to his heart this time and pursue her regardless of her marital status and child? 

Writen By: Michelle Chavez © 2003

Sequel to Have U Ever 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 62343 - Hits: 8113
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 16, 2007 - Last Updated: Jun 16, 2007 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jun 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 10

It's a great story but for some reason the chapters get chopped off at the end of each page.

Author's Response:

Oh I'm sorry about that, I looked at the pages and I didn't see where it's cutting off, could you give me an example, like the chapter that's getting chopped off?

Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 10

This is the last thing I see at the end of the first page: "Abby sighed inwardly to herself. She could tell by his tone she wasn’t going to like what he was about to say. She really didn’t need this right now. “Wha " It cuts off there and when I click next it goes right into chapter 11 and it cuts off at the end of the page there too. Maybe it's my computer. Maybe I need to change the zoom level for my screen.

Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 10

Well I changed the zoom level and the page looked the same. It's still cutting off in the middle of chapter 4.

Author's Response:

Ok so I found what you're talking about.  I have no clue how that happened, but what I'll have to do is go back in and reupload all of the chapters for that story tonight after work.  Thanks so much for letting me know about this problem.

Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 10

It still cuts off. It's now the next sentence after where it was before. Maybe the story needs to be broken into smaller sections. I don't know. Sorry!

Being friends with JC never seemed that big of deal till the one random Friday night that he found my file of Fan Fiction staring, well him. This is my story of well, what happened after...



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1030 - Hits: 1273
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 01, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 01, 2007 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute story!

This is my first story!!!! Please comment and let me know if I completly suck at this! lol

After a long night at the club and what I now see as a regretful morning.... I've semmed to have gotten myself a stalker in the form of Justin Timberlake! Granted he is a nice guy but, there are some things he just doesn't need to know.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 6138 - Hits: 12995
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 28, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 06, 2009 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Aug 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Are you sure this is your first story? lol It's really great! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Aww, Thanks! I'm glad you like it!<3

It's been six years, two hundred and thirty three days, and sixteen hours since he's been home. He drives quietly through the Tennessee country, taking long drags of his cigarette. He is finally home, but how long will he stay?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 7226 - Hits: 7836
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 16, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 30, 2008 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One

Sounds very interesting. I hope to read more.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it! I should be posting more soon, thanks for reading :)

Justin never went to highschool, he toured with a tutor for four years and graduated on stage during a concert. Judy is a busy Central Valley High senior with four months left to do everything she wants before she has to grow up and become a woman. What happens when MTV pairs these two together for a new reality show? Will it just be a semester of fun and then forgotten? Or will a long lasting relationship blossom?



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 109923 - Hits: 61951
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 18, 2008 - Last Updated: Aug 02, 2009 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love this story! Great chapter!

 

I’ve really got to ask, what makes you so much different than me? Is it the way in which you comb your hair, or the fact that you get dressed in front of him each morning? Because I can’t seem to understand, as far as I’m concerned there should be no question as to who he should be with, yet, there he stands, arm around you, comfortable as can be.

Then there’s me.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 18885 - Hits: 34699
Complete?: No - Published: Nov 30, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 29, 2009 -
Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Ohhh, what did he find out? Do tell us soon!

Reviewer: silentm Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven.

Maybe Lauren and Nick are sleeping together. He did defend her quite a bit more than he maybe should have even when Justin told her to get the test.