Penname: treasure [Contact] Real name: Sherry
Member Since: Mar 20, 2009
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When Selah Bernstine decides that college isn't for her, her mother sends her to the one person that can talk some "sense" into her, her sister Ava--who has just scored her dream job as a dancer on Justin Timberlake's FutureSex/LoveShow Tour. Filled with confusing and conflicting feelings about what she truly wants, as well as a broken heart, Selah learns about herself and how to make her desires a reality through the last person she'd ever expect to, all while making mistakes along the way. At the same time, Justin learns about more about himself and wonders: Is what is right in front of him what he has wanted all along?


Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 62091 - Hits: 58393
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 20, 2009 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Damnit to hell!

Love and Trust. They come hand in hand, right? You can't have one without the other. That's what Alonsha lives by. Her excuse for her failed dates and rudeness towards the opposite sex. Why try to fall in love if you're never gonna trust the one you're with? Made sense, until her theory came back to bite her in the ass. . .

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: The Lonnielake Series
Chapters: 49
Wordcount: 124667 - Hits: 127749
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Aug 09, 2008 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Mistake

awwww...that was so sad.  How can any parent tell their child they were a mistake? That's enough to screw anybody up for the rest of their lives.

I love that song by Christina Aguilera.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Date

Her daddy's gonna beat her ass.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I think I'ma like this story. On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Party

That was cute.  Reminds me of the first time I fell in love...or thought I had fell in love. I'm still a little scared for Lonnie. Is her dad gonna find out?

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Okay

Bastard!  I can't believe he blamed all of that on Kyle!  Lonnie should've told the nurse what really happened.  They could've gotten her away from her bastard father.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Gone

Yes!  That's my girl.  I just about yelled at the screen when she stopped. I'm glad she found enough courage to leave her crazy ass father. I hope she took Justin's number with her.

If I got a second chance and was able to push the rewind or redo button on my life for all those moments I regret, I would not change the decision or choices I've made. And you know what? It was and still is all because of him…my weakness…my enemy but my desire…my ‘biker boy’…my…Justin.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 35090 - Hits: 27566
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 14, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 19, 2008 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

I'm already in love with Justin if Bri isn't after this chapter.  Girl he had me sweating. I'm really lovin' his swag...I'm feelin'  a little hot now!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two: I

I like that they've got each others number. I wonder what trouble Bri's got herself in to.  Justin really likes this girl and that's hot.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Part Two: II

awwwww he really digs and respects Bri and that makes him even sexier to me. I know she had to be just about ready to pull her hair out when he wouldn't try anything with her...shit he coulda gave her a kiss or somethin'.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Part Three: I

it's about damn time.  Justin's about to blow her back out!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Part Three: II

God I hope nothing happens to him. I'm have this bad feeling that somethings gonna happen to him.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Part Four: I

damn it all to hell!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Part Four: II

That was really good.  Probably on of my favorites. I need a man like that. You should really write a sequel.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I was wondering where all these comments came from. hehe. Wow well thanks for reading this short and liking it so much and leaving a comment on each chapter. I appreicate it and thanks so much for letting me know what you were thinking. Hehe. I'm happy you did. And yeah, I thought about a sequel but I can't now. Too many other updates need to get out for my other stories. But thanks again! :)

Do Over by Timberlake (NC-17) [Comments - 551]
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There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4, Season 5, Season 6
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 253097 - Hits: 202186
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 30, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 21, 2010 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Jul 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Introductions

Some how I doubt there's nothing to worry about. lol.  Great chapter as always.  Justin and Sash were extra cute in this chapter.  Justin was the romantic like ways.  Love that he makes Sash drop all her defenses and show her softer side.  You already know how I feel about Racheal and it hasn't changed so I'm not gonna say anything about her.  I'm anxious for the next chapter to see how things really go with Jessica.

Oh! I'm glad they finally got time for a freak fest!



Author's Response: LOL freak fest! lol oh, nothing to worry about indeed... why is everybody so pessimistic about that? maybe she's right...maybe. lol and justin is romantic isn't he? makes me want to write sash right out of the story and insert myself instead, but they are so happy together - finally. i wonder how long that'll keep up... thanks for the review!