This was originally intended to be a short story, but someone sparked my creative side and I'm going to expand.
How can he save her when the thing that's breaking her down is in her mind?
ok see that was just, well really sad. i want them to be together, but i want it to be in a place where they both can feel complete on their own *sigh* really good aj :)
Author's Response: They're getting to that place, slowly. Thank you :) I love reading your reviews, it's inspiring!
damn right! so glad that they finally working through things :) fab job aj!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. This is such a fun part to write for me :) it's like...sunshine after the rain, you know? Thank you for reviewing, it means to much to me to know you're reading/enjoying my work. And it means even more that you take the time to tell me you like it :) And just you wait....it'll get even better!!
ok lets talk about how immensely happy i am that they are working at it and at the same time i feel dread about the going home bit. i mean nothing good can come from that. mostly because i am conviced that her mother is satan. AND i just realaized there is a character named morgan.....love it (being that that is my last name and all lol) fantastic job aj!
Author's Response: Yeah, her mother is satan, lol. I'm so happy you're enjoying this story, it means a lot to me to get your feedback. :)
wow. that was seriously intense and yet so GOOD. i'm go glad she stood up to her mother like that. go gia :) fantastic AJ :) and get online girl so i can help you with your site!1
Author's Response: Thanks :) it was intense to write too. I've become so attatched to Gia and JT...I'm glad you liked it! and I'm trying to get online...my wireless sucks and it's a toss up if I'll be able to get on or not!
finally a little goodness. just love this aj :)
Author's Response: I had to put something good in here, and I promise that it's going to get better :) thank you, for everything. I'm pretty sure you're my Hero, Ash :)
so that was so so sad. but its progrees which is good. we want progress
Author's Response: Progress is always a good thing. And that should be the last of the sad things for a while. I'm workin' on some good ol' fashioned lovin' now :) Stace demanded sex, lol. Thanks for the review, Ash!
wow. i'm glad i took the time to read this. SO sad. i understand her frustration, but why is she so mad> hmmm more?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it =] Her reasoning as to why she's mad will be explain in the next chapter or so =]
once again, i really like this. i understand where she is coming from. her hesitancy is understandable. i just i don't know....what her to at least try? :) keep it coming
Author's Response: Thank you =] Alisan didn't expect anyone, especially Justin to come out with feelings for her, so she was taken aback. She's more angry at herself more than anything on how she handled it, and she's angry at him for changing how she saw her life turning out. She was ready to live alone and not be with anyone (since it seemed that every relationship she had failed - especially with JC) and then he came along and told her things she only wished to hear. Suddenly she did, so now she's angry. She doesn't know what she wants anymore because of this and she hates not knowing. =]
wow. wasn't really expecting that. i mean i'm glad she answered, but wow. thats a lot to deal with. i hope they make it
Author's Response: Only a little fork in the road. =] It has a lot of purpose in the story, trust me =] I usually don't like writing stuff like accidents and stuff in stories unless they are a priority in a story to make it more in-your-face ... which this was for (mainly for Justin/Alisan). Thanks for the review!
at least she didn't wake up and forget that he was on her good side. update was great....more please!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you =] Look for an update soon =]
ugh. i thought things were on the right path, bit noooooo. geez. well i can only hope we can fix this. and why is going around sleeping with everyone? not so good. but this was great :)
ahhhhh. you have got to be kidding me! i mean NOW she gives in. ugh . this is going to give me an ulcer, the best kind, if an ulcer is ever good :)
Author's Response: Hahaha, well, I'm not sure if they are necessarily good, but I will take it as a compliment anyway! ;] Thanks for reviewing!
UGH. JC? seriously. thats her new excuse? i don't buy it, sadly i think he does. please fix it!
sad. sad. sad. sad. i can't even get beyond that.
Author's Response: Haha, I think that about sums it up =]
here's the thing. i feel bad for the girl, but at the same time i feel like she brings it upon herself, even if its just a little bit. but obviously i want them to work things out. AND is there any way you can give me the link for you are my light? i've never heard it. fab job girl!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you =] I will gladly send you the link (I'll upload it to sendspace for you, I can't recall where I found it so I'll just send it to you) as soon as I find the song itself, hahaha.
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