Penname: Keediluv [Contact] Real name: Kijuana
Member Since: Apr 19, 2007
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Justin Timberlake’s goal was to steal the heart of long time friend Beyoncé Knowles.  After doing so life couldn’t get any better in his eyes, but living in a world where nothing good ever lasts and your privacy is a rare commodity can wear and tear at any strong foundation.  Not allowing drama to destroy what God put together Justin and Beyoncé come out stronger then ever and ready to take a huge step in their relationship. With their story book ending an arms length away Justin is devastated to learn his biggest nightmare could very well be his reality, and finds him self asking can heaven wait?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 43073 - Hits: 18272
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jul 29, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

McCreamy!  That's cute!  This was a good chapter.  It's cute how Justin's all worried about his woman.  Ciara's a feisty one isn't she?  I'll have to keep my eye on her!

Ki

P.S- I LOVE the pictures that are placed in the story!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like them.

Skin Deep by Mel514 (PG-13) [Comments - 8]

"Her beauty has never faltered in my eyes but I know there are moments where she doesn’t feel that way. She swears she has imperfections, even though I’ve looked high and low and can’t seem to find them. It’s times like these when I take it upon myself, to remind her just exactly how sexy she is, all insecurities aside."

 

JC takes it upon himself to remind the one he loves that her beauty is still there, regardless of what she sees. 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2849 - Hits: 1456
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 01, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 01, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Skin Deep

This is so sensual!  I love that he just took his time to admire her from afar (even though he was right there).  Truly beautiful honey.  Great Job!

Ki



Author's Response: Yes, it's kind of romantic to think of it from a slow, sensual away! A little change never hurts when it comes to writing. I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!

Past Featured Story Two years have passed since the tour in which Broken Angel opened for Justin and JC ended. Secrets have been revealed and tensions are thicker than ever between Shelby and Justin. They are both dealing with their own struggles of day to day life as well as memories of old. Shelby's life has never been so stressful as Broken Angel is currently working on their sophomore album to follow up their platinum debut CD.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 17344 - Hits: 11160
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 01, 2009 - Last Updated: May 13, 2012 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just asked Kahli about you!  I've been worried...how are you?  I'm going to read your update but I just had to say Hi and I love you and I hope your doing alright...now, on to chapter 1 for me!

Ki

Past Featured Story

Justin Timberlake was going back to school. He knew that he was going to be in hell on earth indefinitely because he wasn't going to just any school. He was going to attend the toughest, strictest boarding school in the country to prove to the public and his fans that he could indeed survive school life after being issued the challenge on live television. And, he was going in prepared for whatever his school life experience would dish out at him. There was just one flaw in his little plan. He was prepared for everything except the last thing he ever thought would happen to him while attending Higher Heights Boarding School...falling in love. Like that wasn't disaster enough, he had to end up falling for the most unlikely candidate in the entire school who wasn't even his type which only proved to Justin that the biggest challenge he was going to face, was yet to come...



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 36
Wordcount: 144965 - Hits: 122878
Complete?: No - Published: May 16, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 05, 2011 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Oh...So Close!

Okay...I was trying (again) to wait until I read all of the chapters updated to review but I couldn't wait.  Aaaghhh!  You've hit it out of the park again with this one sweetie.  I love Delilah's swagger.  She's so unaffected by his status and even goes as far as liking him for who he is.  Justin is a refreshing mix of cocky, confident and genuine in his adoration of her.  I think they are an adorable pair together so far.  

Ryan's a punk ass for not standing up for her the way he's supposed to.  Fuck all the other shit...she's family and family comes first.  

Sandra and Michelle are cute, quirky and loyal...which is what everybody needs in real friends.

I'm loving what I'm reading so far honey!

Ki

P.S-Can Ethan become acquainted with the front end of a MACK truck?  just a question.  Love it! 



Author's Response:

Aw yay! Thanks for reading this one Ki! I'm glad you're enjoying it hehe and you love Justin and Delilah. I'm glad you understand the characters' personalities also. :)

Ryan is just a headache all around for everyone. He really hasn't proven why he's this way either. But maybe he will eventually.

And omg, that's kind of harsh for Ethan to be ran over by a truck. lol. he's disgusting I know but death is kind of harsh! maybe a good beat down? hehe. Thanks for commenting chica! 

Justin Timberlake used to be the biggest icon in pop music, and an even bigger entrepreneur.  But a twist of fate took his life, his career, and his future, and smashed it into 100 million pieces.  What happens when Justin moves back to his childhood home to try and salvage what's left of his manhood?

 

The story inspiration: 

he stood up out of bed,

it was as high as he could get.

but the limit was the sky,

way back when he was a kid.

 

but now he's hooked on the casino

'cause it's always an open window

that keeps the wind in his sails

while everything in life just fails.

 

he used to be a swan

but now that bird is long gone

flown from a property 

with no equity

 

so he buys the sunday paper

he likes to read wedding announcements

is he the son of a doctor

well if so, i bet that choice pleased her father

its not the sanctity of vows,

nor the white picket fence house--

it's the inenvitable parting

the ending of the dream starting.

 

the medication he's on

keeps him moving along

but he's still afraid to sing

afraid that he will be seen

and look like a fool

like he did at thirty two.

when she finally told the truth:

"i found someone new"

 

and you may think it is pathetic

sadness must be genetic

but if someone shot you through your window

yeah you may live to feel the wind blow

but will you be able to stand up?

walk around and throw your hands up?

and if those bullets fly again

what the hell will you do then?

 

yeah, what the hell will you do then? 


-imaginary.baseball.league, "sara" 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 6020 - Hits: 7451
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 04, 2009 - Last Updated: Sep 05, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Is it sad that I want to fix him?  I just feel so sad that he's not alright that I want to coddle him like a baby.  HAHA! I'm sure Mr. Timberlake will be alright.  And I like Victoria and I'm interested in seeing what happens with the two of them. :)  Good start mama.

Author's Response: Haha...thanks!  No, it's not sad that you want to fix him.  It's definitely my intent to make you feel that way.  Thanks for the review, sweetie!  Miss you! :)

The First Lady is tired of President Timberlake always tending to his job.  Today, she needs him to tend to her.  Being the Commander in Chief, how could he turn her down?

 

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst

Series: The Dirty Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3981 - Hits: 3229
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 04, 2009 - Last Updated: Sep 04, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Mr. President!  I've always wanted to say that...lol!  I loved this.  I like that she made his ass work for it.  He needed to remember that he is a husband first and she got it out of him.  Great job hon!

Ki 



Author's Response: Damn straight!  Yummmy...presidentj!  He is hot, for sure. hehehe.  Thanks for the review, lovely!

Everyone has their problems.  He just never thought his would be this big.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 51209 - Hits: 43037
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 11, 2009 - Last Updated: Aug 15, 2011 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: "The only good thing about hospitals is knowing that you are there."

So, I'm just a bit heartbroken over this.  I honestly have never thought about something like this happening to one of them, let alone him.  I only say it like that because he's the one I'll forever crush on.  This is hard...but really realistic and I want to thank you for bringing it to the forefront.  We don't like to think this way but things happen and we have to prepare for it.  I love that Justin's taking care of him and that the guys are there for him too.  And I love Lauren!  I totally agree with Lance, she's his wife.  Again, this is really hard to read but I won't stop reading it.  Amazing doesn't begin to describe your words put to paper. :)

Ki 

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: "The only good thing about hospitals is knowing that you are there."

P.S- I pray and hope that your friend's family (you included) are going to be okay...one day at a time :)

Author's Response: Thank you!  Sorry it was a delayed response ... I'm horrendous at responding.  They're all doing okay; it was a quick diagnosis with a quick passing ... I think that's the only good thing that came about - having her sick for longer could only have made it worse.  Though both ways are difficult, especially to say goodbye to a parent.  My friend, her sister and father are doing as you said: one day at a time.  :)  <3

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: "Salute me and I'm putting my foot up your ass."

So the thought of him being sick still evokes a scary emotion deep inside me but again, you have a way with words that is extraordinary.  Thanks for giving him a good Christmas. Him singing would put me at ease and I'm glad it helped him.  I can't wait for things to pop off between he and Lauren.  Good chapter mama! :)

longest. visual. ever.

This is a fic request by Mari (Timberlake)--hence why she's listed as a co-auther (is that what you're supposed to do in this situation?  I'm not sure, I'm new at this).  Anyway, the story is inspired by the Trey song called "Role play."

I know she requested a bunch of awesome writers to write it, and I'm nowhere near as good as them--but I figured I'd give a shot at it anyway.

Enjoy :)



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Challenges: Role Play

Series: The Dirty Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4545 - Hits: 3701
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Sep 29, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was nice....I especially like the playful banter Justin had going on.  Good work!

Ki



Author's Response: awww, thanks Ki, for the review.  really glad you like the batner--i'm working on my dialogue.  I'm usually more of a descriptor...so thanks for the compliment!

Nympho by ninabina (NC-17) [Comments - 56]

Over the past few years, Justin Timberlake has become a nympho.  No longer satisfied with the true meaning of life, he just wastes it away on each countless broad that can get him off.

But can his friends or family beat some sense into him and get him to change his ways?  Or is he destined to loneliness, or even worse--a deadly disease.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick, Group, JC Chasez, Joey Fatone, Justin Timberlake, Lance Bass
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: The Dirty Series
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 36938 - Hits: 43595
Complete?: No - Published: Oct 01, 2009 - Last Updated: Aug 18, 2013 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Day 5, Pt. 1

Makes a person wanna be Nurse Jackie...awesomeness!

Ki 



Author's Response: I totally wish I was Nurse Jckie. :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Day 5, Pt. 2

Justin needs his ass beat talking to his momma like that.  I agree the doctor needs more personality, but Justin didn't have to go there.  That addiction is something else.

 

You are TOO GOOD!

Ki 



Author's Response:

I don't care if he's a grown ass man, If I were his momma, I would have thrown him over my knee and slapped him. :)  Thanks for the review girl, and being a beta.  YOU ROCK.

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Day 6 & 1/2: Boy Meets Girl

Wow...Cadence is all kinds of awesome!  I hope she continues to give Justin a run for his money.  I really love this!

 

Ki 



Author's Response: Me too!  He sooooo needs it. ;)  Thanks for reviewing dear, you know I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Day 9: Glass Walls.

Poor naughty Justin!  I have a feeling that things are going to get very interesting for our poor freak of the week.  Ha!  I love it mama!

Happy New Year! 



Author's Response:

Oh, yes they will.  haha, "freak of the week."  he so is.  :)

 Thanks for the review, darlin'.  Love ya, miss ya!  Happy New YeaR!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Day 12: Nurse Jackie

Shut up!!! To say I'm shocked is a bit of an understatement. That's quite a surprise you had in there for us mama but it was so yummy!  Awesome, awesome, awesome mama. Per usual of course! 

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks, mama! Miss you tons -- so glad you liked it. I'm in the writing mood again, so I'm hoping to finish this story before the end of the year! <3