Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: General, Humor, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1080 - Hits: 1087
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 08, 2009 - Last Updated: Aug 08, 2009 -
absolutely adorable!!!! aww, i miss bf convos like that :( lol
Author's Response:
lol totally know what ya mean! haha.
thank ya love! i appreciate it!
We took off our clothes
Threw ‘em in the bushes
Mud between our toes
Bare white tushes
Lord, how’d he get me to do it
How’d he talk me into it, now
Sunlight on the river, glistenin’
And we were skinny dippin’
i l.o.v.e. this! brilliant. great song. i felt like i was there in that river... and it felt good, LMAO. *bows down to the master* haha
Author's Response:
*tackles you with a hug* EEP! This review made my day! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Elise needs to study for her anatomy test, but her Justin isn't really helping her out, until she convinces him to play a little anatomy game.
Another visual for you, part of my newly titled "The Dirty" Series.
Enjoy!
i need to go to med school...like now, lol
lol, get to it, woman! ;)
thanks for the review.
longest. visual. ever.
This is a fic request by Mari (Timberlake)--hence why she's listed as a co-auther (is that what you're supposed to do in this situation? I'm not sure, I'm new at this). Anyway, the story is inspired by the Trey song called "Role play."
I know she requested a bunch of awesome writers to write it, and I'm nowhere near as good as them--but I figured I'd give a shot at it anyway.
Enjoy :)
*orgasm*
seriously, i think that i'm about to buy a ticket to LA, pick up some 'supplies' and rape the shit out of Justin. omg... him all tied up and submissive...ol' child, do you know what you just did to my libido? mmm...mmm...mmm..... lol
is this TMI? well too bad - it was just that damn good. Honestly, I was caught up in the first half of that song about being touched in my sleep, but the second part about him needing some assistance barely crossed phased me, but this story right here made that second verse my absolute FAVORITE part of the song. i'm seriously bowing down to you. whoever does this challenge next has a lot to compete with. bravo!
haha...not too much TMI at all. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :) let me know if you ever want to issue another challenge--I'm up for it. I've written a lot of other visuals in the dirty series, if you feel the need for more of a Justin fix. I highly recommend first lady--it was my first, so I put a lot of effort into it. I think it's the hottest, for sure. haha.
thanks for the review!!!! (and the story idea!)
Me and my heart we got issues
Don't know if I should hate you or miss you
Damn I wish that I could resist you
Can't decide if I should slap you or kiss you
Issues - The Saturdays
oh mercy! i love trace so much and it pisses me off that justin is so douchey, but at the same time it's kinda cute that he's so pathetic :/ LOL drake and i need to get married soon, just because he's channing tatum :D
Author's Response: Drake is hot stuff, it's true. Trace is not so much hot stuff but cute because he's an idiot :o)
omg, hollie! I LOVE it! justin is such a jackass, seriously. nadine and i are bffs right about now. is it wrong that i still want justin? why is he so damn tempting??? grrr... lol
Author's Response: I know! Why is it always the assholes that are most attractive...
You stand in the corner of a crowded club, sipping your gin martini: stirred, up, one olive; and slightly rocking to the music. You fix your hair and sneak a peak down your body making sure everything is in place. When you look up you see a tall man with dirty blonde curls and eyes as blue as the water in Paradise.
“What’s your name?” he asks, holding a glass of coke and some kind of alcohol.
You laugh and play with the olive in your martini, “Really? That’s your pick up line?”
He gives you a half smile and looks down at the ground before answering, “Who says I’m trying to pick you up?”
“OK then, keep walking,”this was my challenge and i just noticed this was posted, LOL. i loved your take on it. it's fine that you didn't use the words, the concept was there. the whole club scene was hilarious. i even laughed when he said Victor, LOL i can only hope my future hubby and i will be doing the same :D lol
Author's Response: Well I just noticed the review so I guess we're even haha. Sorry it look me forever to respond! I'm glad you liked it :-)
For My Secret Santa, ninabina!
To him it's not that big a deal, but to her it's everything.
i loved it. made me wish justin was under my tree :) lol
Author's Response: Hee, that'd be great, wouldn't it? Thanks so much :)
omfgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!! that is so FUCKING ADORABLE :( i cried like a baby in every scene. omgggggggggg i want this. i want this STORY to be a scene IN MY LIFE, but i gotta get a boyfriend first :/ see, right when i'm getting comfortable in my 'i hate men' rut, i stumble upon this glorious sap and i LOVE it. justin was such a dense asshole (very realistic portrayal of a man, btw) and i'm SO leah. i would've been holding that shit in and then going back and thinking i overreacted and let the amazing sex be his way of showing me he loves me and blah, blah, blah, but that's BULLSHIT. i birthed your offspring and you can't give me a ring after SIX years. see, if this story were about me, it would be longer because it would take chapters and chapters to get me calm again lol but omg, so CUTE. i'm going to shut my bipolar mouth now :)
Author's Response: GAH I glad you like it!!! I think that this is probably my favorite story that I've written just becasue it feels so believable to me for some reason. And what's weird is I'm not really a big fan of Daddy!J hahaha I'm glad you liked it and found it relatable because that's exactly what I was going for! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Though never explicitly voiced, the knowledge of her friends and family’s disapproval of the man she loved persuaded Gemma Porter to deny his request to elope at the age of twenty and caused his subsequent and abrupt move out of town. Five years later, a now wealthy and successful Justin Timberlake returns, and by the most unfortunate of events, Gemma continuously finds herself in his presence. Her friends and family don’t remember him, Justin jokes with her as if she hadn’t broken his heart, and most importantly, Gemma must come to terms with the fact that she may still be in love with him.
you definitetly have a jane austen flair, which is definitely a compliment :) i love it so far...onto the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I cannot believe you just said I have a jane austen flair!!! What a compliment! Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I cannot believe you just said I have a jane austen flair!!! What a compliment! Thanks so much!
ahhhhhhhh i love this story. i agree with trace, fuck that! so awkward on so many levels, but had justin been sensible, there would be no story, eh? hilarious bickering between justin and trace by the way. package will always make me giggle lol
Author's Response: Yay! Yeah trace totally knows what's up haha. And clearly, if justin would be willing to look deep enough he would acknowledge the fact that he's so hung up on gemma. But you're right, if he was reasonable there would be no story.
And I'm glad you felt their discussion was funny!
he was sure she thought he was a crazy stalker, now. No one shows up at your new doorstep after so long without speaking except crazy stalkers. that was one of the most hilarious things i've ever read. justin has a real problem with people touching his stuff. i love that you show that throughout the story, making justin flawed in such a normal way. i also love that he's a photographer, such a unique alternative career choice. their whole conversation was hella awkward and two points to justin for the peter burn. gemma was hella pissed her husband might not be around for their wedding - god forbid if DC calls! geez... that's a lot of time apart and no hot, passionate, electric sex to speak of? something tells me justin knows how to light it up...mmm... if only i could speak from first hand exxxperience ;) lol onto the next!
Author's Response:
BAHAHA! I'm so glad Justin's able to make you laugh! He...is paranoid in the worst ways, sometimes. And he does! He's just very protective of things he's proud of, :). Hahaha, yes, Justin was just JOKING but Gemma sort of flipped...and no, defintiely no hot, passionate, electric sex.
LOLOL Oh my god, I'm pretty sure Justin knows how to SET THINGS ON FIRE.
I'm so glad you're liking it, by the way!
Justin pushed in the chair with a thud and ran his hands up and down the wooden arms. Still looking down he answered Trace. "We're just way too different." that was such a sad moment. omg, i feel like justin's gonna have a fucking meltdown and damn it i wanna know WTF happened! all these little clues and reminders, but i want to know what shit hit the fan that caused this mess!... that is all. onto the next!
Yeah, poor Justin, he's clearly still trippin about Gemma. And ohhh, you just wait until the next couple chapters...all I have to say is that Justin only allows himself to be sad for so long...after awhile it just gets old.
:D Fun is to come, I promise.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! the ending got me :( justin is the sweetest ex-boyfriend in the whole wide world. gemma, leave peter! he won't even notice lol can i just say that gemma slipping down that gravel because of justin's mini-flashing was HILARIOUS. i'm so glad i'm not the only one in love with elastic band of a man's boxer briefs ;) that was a sensual scene and i would love more of those past or present *wink*wink*nudge*nudge* update soon!
Hahaha, he's sweet to us, but to Gemma he's pretty much the bane of her existance....sort of! DEAR LORD, YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO LOVES THE ELASTIC BAND OF MEN'S BOXER BRIEFS. It's pretty much like the third sexiest part on any man's body!!! Hahaha, you'll get your scenes eventually! Gemma's just a slow mover by nature, it takes awhile for her to get going!
I'm glad you liked the chapter! :)
adorable! and i don't even read JC stories haha this should be longer. JC should've called her up lmao
Author's Response:
how can you not read JC stories?! He's like the best thing ever!! lol...I appreciate you lowering your standards to read this story ;) lol <3