that thing justin said was so deep. i mean 'to have the two people i care most about in the world with me. what is confusing about that' i mean i was like damn i wish i had some guy that i was real serious with to say something like that to me.
i don't like that girl and that's all i have to say.
he should send his mom with them b/c i don't trust that girl for nothing.
that was fuckin crazy and i loved it. i was like what the hell am i reading for a second but then i was like wow you know. i can honestly say i've never read a story like this one.
Author's Response: Well, thank you for that. I strive to be different I guess. I know that the story may seem strange at first but as you keep on reading then it will all start to come together. So when you were like \' what the hell am I reading\' I had to laugh at that because sometimes I\'m like \' what the heck am I writing\' Lol. But thanks for reading and giving it a chance.\r\n\r\nThanx for the review sugar! :)
who's song is that? i've never heard it before, did you make it up or is it a real song?
Author's Response: Hey!! I love that song...I wish I could say I wrote it. But it\'s actually called \"One\" by Elliott Yamin. It\'s a beautiful song and his voice is amazing on it!!! Hope you like it too! Thanks for the review!!
Two people. One tour.
Welcome to the FutureSex/LoveShow.
i was kind of lost for some of this chapter but i can say that since i just started reading this i kept singing the "i think she knows" part of lovestoned. i don't know why but i couldn't stop and i'm doing it while i'm typing this. when i start reading a story i'm never post to each individual one unless there like two chapters. i really did think they were about to get together or at least be makeout buddies i guess.
usually i'd have some comment or but i don't except for that my love is just stuck in my head right now. i love this story b/c it doesn't have anything to do with cheating type situation or some way out there drama & no pregnant girls. i don't like stories like that too much since i feel like i can't relate to it.
see they should have just done it regardless. you gotta block out the distractions otherwise nobody might ever get kissed in the world if they stopped b/c a phone rang or who knows what else.
well any hope i had of them getting together is screwed now b/c chelsea ruined the whole damn thing with her non-communication issues. i know its not all her fault but she's on some 80/20 stuff and justin is the 20 obviously. i just don't like her right now.
Author's Response: 80/20? I totally don;t get that reference *lol8
one question: is the end or is it like this is the end and i'm gonna do a sequal?
Author's Response: This is the "dear Lord I'm never going to write a long story ever again" part of the finishing process. It usually lasts no more than a month. As for sequels... hmm. Depends if I find another story in those two.
i know exactly what he's gonna say and i feel so bad right now like in my stomach i guess. you know like sympathy pains, i always get that when someone isn't feeling good. once my mom ate some bad food & she got sick then i got sick even though it wasn't contagious. its dreadful b/c i work with little kids and they get sick alot and i always end up sick no matter what. i got distracted from my comment on the story but it was great even with this thing that i think is gonna happen in this next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks for the awesome review. i dont mind that you got distracted lol. and if you know thanks for not saying and then giving it away to everyone lol. hopefully will have an update soon.
The last time we saw Lauren Walters, she was working as personal assistant for one of the most arrogant men in the entertainment industry. She never would have guessed falling in love with her boss was in the stars. Now Lauren is girlfriend to none other than Justin Timberlake and she couldn’t be happier.
But good things never last very long and Lauren just might have to learn the hard way in this sequel to Deranged Delusions. Can she save the good things without ruining her life and those she loves in the process? Or will deception and distrust destroy her perfect life as she knows it?
if justin cheats i'm gonna bitch about that whenever or if he evens thinks about it. i would just dump his ass and get it over with now so i wouldn't have to deal with the drama.
Author's Response: You're just going to have to wait and see if he cheats are not. Not going to give all the goods up front! But I'm glad you're liking the story and thanks for the reivew! - Amanda
i don't care what anybody else says about maura, i don't trust her ass. girls lie, women lie and i know i do alot as hard as i try not to. see lauren should have gotten another guy to be his PA instead, he could have been straight or gay. she wouldn't have to worry about anything happening then.
Author's Response: I can see your point, but the thing is Justin doesn't really like the male PAs. The only one he's been able to stand was Trace and that's mainly because they're BFF and all that stuff. I'm sure if Justin got a guy PA he would be an idiot and think that Trace would take it the wrong way and see it like he was replacing his best friend. Justin really isn't the sharpest pencil in the bag. Again, Maura isn't that bad. Like I said early, just misunderstood. - Amanda
that's wrong to make us what to the next part to see what happens next. i don't even understand what the fuck just happened but some crazy shit is goin on right now. when do you think you'll be putting this next part up anyway b/c i can't wait to read this. i usually hate those justin gets with his pa stories but i can't stop reading this one.
i can't believe he fuckin said that, i could not be here. i mean him saying that just pushed the shit right over the edge. i wouldn't even try to talk to him or anything unless he dumped maura out on her ass. i mean i'm not saying all there drama is her fault but she's a big ass part of it. that whole thing made me cry & i just kept saying "wow" b/c i couldn't believe it. its why i hate reading things like this b/c its makes me get emotional. anyway that's just stuck in my head right now "Don't worry, she's better than you ever were". what a way to make sure your relationship is over.
Author's Response: Yeah Justin is kind of an idiot in that sense and I'm sorry I made you cry! That's one dynamic of their relationship that they need to work on because once the start fighting they get at each other's throats. But then again they can't really work on it since they aren't together anymore heh. Thanks again for the feedback and an update is coming soon! - Amanda
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