The fantasy: one of them choosing one of us
twenty-something, addicted to music, love to write, working on my Master's in psychology, waiting to fall in love...
For my Secret Santa, Musicmel--hope you enjoy it girl!
Justin Timberlake learns that you can always find your way back home--with a little help.
oh good heavens, woman! I'm now regretting ever telling you having them sleep together this first night wasn't such a good idea! lol...I love the beginning of this story!! There are a few issues with you switching tenses but I like where this is headed :) *next chapter*
ahhhh!!! LOVE IT!!!! Please tell me you're going to continue this. Please, please, please?!?!? I want to know what happens on NYE. The way their first kiss went I can only imagine how hot these two would be together.
This story was so awesome. It had me laughing out loud at several parts. The teasing back and forth between Justin and Mia was hilarious and I loved your portrayal of Sadie. Bravo, my dear!! :)
For my Secret Santa, sChErZo! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
For her, he was an unexpected hotel guest. For him, she was an unexpected Christmas companion...
awwww! I loved it. So cute. Except I'm jealous of Jaz. I wish Justin would suddenly walk into my life and decide he was in love with me. lol...awesome job :)
For my Secret Santa Azchickadee! I really hope you like it. Happy New Year!
It was the night before Christmas and all through the house, Every creature was stirring even those darn mice.
(That's not how the story goes JC)
It is in my version now stop interrupting me woman.
(Whatever you say dude.)
The stockings were hung by the chimney with care
But then they caught fire and left the chimney bare.
(What are you talking about boy?)
Will you stop cutting me off. The kids are enjoying this, aren't you?
Yes Uncle Josh, you're story's funny.
See, the kids are loving it, now hush.
(You have one more time to try and shush me and I swear I'll burn your Gingerbread)
That's cold blooded woman
(I know, now continue)
The children were nestled all snug in their beds
While visions of Spongebob danced around in their heads.
(Spongebob wasn't even around when this was written. How many glasses of eggnog have you had?)
Three, I know how to handle my liquor intake, don't I kids?
Huh?
Nevermind, your Aunt was just teasing.
(Teasing my foot. This is nothing like the real thing Josh. Kids, go on up to bed, Uncle Josh and I will be up in a minute.)
You would ruin my story wouldn't you?
(Just shut up and kiss me so we can go finish this atrocity that is your story.)
You know you love it girl.
hahaha! I love it!! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
Author's Response: I really do hope you love the rest! Thank you so much for reviewing love. :)
It’s JC and Carly’s first New Years Eve together and things don’t turn out exactly how they had planned.
A companion shorty to 'A Million Faces in a Crowd.'
sigh! this was perfect!! I love these two together and it was fun to see this little scene between them. You had me drooling a couple times (right along with Carly). First with JC in his suit and then when he took his shirt off an dhe was just in the slacks and then later with the visual of him in sweat pants and glasses....good grief, that man is sexy no matter WHAT he wears! I bet he could make a burlap sack look sexy! LOL...I hope we get to see more of these two in the future. They are adorable :)
Author's Response: lol Yes, I had to pin point the most sexy versions of him even though he is like 99.9% of the time. So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the review :)
I watch how the moon sits in the sky on a dark night, shining with the light from the sun. The sun doesn’t give light to the moon, assuming the moon’s going to owe it one.
-Linkin Park
"She has never been a game. It has never been about winning, it has always been about consuming. Everything inside me craves her, her body, her smile, her voice, her breath, I ache for her soul." - Justin
O. M. G. I....I'm speechless...I am in awe over this first chapter. First of all: DAMN can you write!! This was so amazingly descriptive and heartbreakingly emotional. I can't even put into words how in awe of you I am right now. This is the kind of writing I wish I could do but I can't. Second: when is the next chapter coming because now I'm addicted! lol...Please don't be nervous about this story. If this first chapter is any indication it is going to be AMAZING! <3
Author's Response:
Girly, I heart ya!!!! You seriously rock my world! Thank you so much for all the encouragement, advice, and editing! You're the best!!!
I am thrilled that you liked it! I was pretty nervous! You can totally write this stuff...pffft, you rock!
Anyways, I am sending you an email very shortly with the next chapter! :) Can't wait to hear what you think!!!
-BD
I like the banner without the "obssession" on it better. You already have all of my quesitons for this chapter :) I haven't thought of anything else since yesterday except...when are you going to be updating?! lol...I'm so intrigued with this story and it's only just begun!! He's such an interesting, complex, dark, creepy character. I don't usually like stories where Justin is something other than the guy we all know (or wish we did) and love but you have me completely hooked on this one!!! <3
Author's Response:
Ahhh...you're like my lifesaver!!!
Thank you so much for all your help, thoughts, questions, comments, input, concerns...just everything!!!! You rock!!!!!
I am so glad that you're enjoying a Justin that you normally wouldn't read. That's just...awesome to hear!!
Love ya tons!!!
-BD
She's been in his thoughts constantly for weeks. If only he knew who she was.
*~*For Secret Santa, SomethingBlue42... I'm so sorry you had a long wait my dear. Hope you enjoy. *~*
loved it!! I love the connection they have and have had since the first moment they met. I'm sad for everything Lindsay's had to go through but it led her to Justin and now they can be perfectly in love with each other together! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for the review and for reading, it's greatly appreciated. :)
Every day we make choices that change the course of our lives. Every minute choice leads to another which leads to where you are standing today. Some choices are the best, and the other... well other are simply a necessary part of the process.
Everyone's happily ever after, isn't a fairytale, it's a journey.
One choice, one decision, changes everything.
Sometimes one night changes everything.
ok, so....I'm confused...which, really isn't anything new. LOL I'm confused often. I thought for SURE Justin was the father of Adi's baby but then they just met and they haven't met before. O_o I don't like being confused, Mel. lol...you better fix this! hahaha <3
Author's Response: Gotcha!! I had a strong feeling that everyone would assume he was the father.I’ll fill you in on the details… soon : ) Thanks love! Let’s just hope I don’t disappoint when the details do unfold.
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