Penname: Keediluv [Contact] Real name: Kijuana
Member Since: Apr 19, 2007
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Do Over by Timberlake (NC-17) [Comments - 551]
Past Featured Story

There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4, Season 5, Season 6
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 253097 - Hits: 202126
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 30, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 21, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Consequences

OMG!!  She's going to have a baby...aww!  Pregnancy changes everything...

I'm so excited for her and who knows, maybe Justin will get his shit together now???  I love that you updated quickly and I can only hope you can do it again?  That's my wishful thinking.  Awesome update hon!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Five

Hmm...so Justin's pulling out that charming, witty nature of his huh?  I don't know how Sash is supposed to turn away from all that but I'm pretty sure you'll come up with something awesome to sway us.  Awesome, per usual!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Awkwardness

I felt so bad for the both of them.  You know, it really was awkward and weird.  They both are holding out on that connection they know is undeniable.  Or, maybe that's just in my mind...lol.  Loved the update and I hope you give us another one soon.

Ki 

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Stuck

You know...this slow torture thing they're doing to each other (more her than him) is killing me.  I just want someone to do something to rock the boat one way or the other you know?  Is it bad that I want her to be with him even though he's the one that messed up?  I can't help it...he has such cute and endearing moments.  Too awesome, per usual.

Ki 

When Superstar Justin Timberlake meets up-and-coming song
bird Marz, it's a match made in pop music heaven and a publicist dream. The only
thing causing stress in their tabloid-picture-perfect relationship? Justin's
inability to finish the music for his next solo album. Enter Marz's younger sister
Kara, the girl who's been living in her shadow for years as her personal assistant
and doormat. With Kara's knack for melodies and Justin's God-given talent with
lyrics, everyone thought it was a genius collaboration. But what happens when
Justin starts to wonder if he's fallen in love with the wrong sister?

Co-written with Jaz.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 85594 - Hits: 63171
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 18, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 02, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

First off...THANK YOU for making me love Trace!  Not that I thought there was anything wrong with him before...I've just never seen him like this.  He's sweet and nice and deserves better than the treatment of his girlfriend and his best friend.

 

But I like Kara and Justin together!  I'm so confused and outdone with the both of them.  She's awesome and you can't help but love her but it ain't right what she did man...and Justin...needs.to.stop.  Awesome story ladies.  

Ki 

I'm livin' two different lives...One girl in the day, you at night...



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3639 - Hits: 1369
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 27, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 27, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Last Time

Oh my....what a tangled web.  This was a nice one Mari.  Great job!

Author's Response: indeed it is. but who better to tangle up with than justin timberlake? lol i'm terrible, i know. thankies for the review, sugar!

"Spare me your freakin' dirty looks
Now don't blame me
You want to cash out and get the hell out of town
Why are these lights so bright
Did we get hitched last night?
Now we're partners in crime
Don't be a baby
Remember what you told me
Shut up and put your money where your mouth is
That's what you get for waking up in Vegas
Get up and shake the glitter off your clothes now
That's what you get for waking up in Vegas"

 

 

Inspired by "Waking Up In Vegas" by Katy Perry



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: Vegas
Chapters: 33
Wordcount: 112395 - Hits: 127605
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 13, 2008 - Last Updated: May 27, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30: As Close To A Fairytale Ending As It's Gonna Get

I don't even know how to start this.  This is the very first time I've read something by you and I'm awestruck.  I get why people are on the kate is great bandwagon...you're flipping awesome!  Madison is adorable, Justin is Justin, JC will always be freakin awesome to me because I love him so much and I want to have his babies no matter what and I luff Chelsea and Trace.  I've read this entire story in one sitting and I'm completely happy that I did.  Not many people can make me do that and I'm so glad that I finally sat my ass down and read this.

I'm starting Welcome To The World?(I think that's the title) tomorrow.  You are pretty damn great, Kate!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30: As Close To A Fairytale Ending As It's Gonna Get

I don't even know how to start this.  This is the very first time I've read something by you and I'm awestruck.  I get why people are on the kate is great bandwagon...you're flipping awesome!  Madison is adorable, Justin is Justin, JC will always be freakin awesome to me because I love him so much and I want to have his babies no matter what and I luff Chelsea and Trace.  I've read this entire story in one sitting and I'm completely happy that I did.  Not many people can make me do that and I'm so glad that I finally sat my ass down and read this.

I'm starting Welcome To The World?(I think that's the title) tomorrow.  You are pretty damn great, Kate!

Ki



Author's Response:

wow... thank you! haha.

this one was most definitely my baby and it was a complete and total blast to write, so i'm super glad you enjoyed it! and i am amazed you read it in one sitting. lol.

thank you my dear! i appreciate it more than ya know!

Past Featured Story Pop/Rock Princess and "Queen of Mean" Callie Phelps  thinks she has it all figured out, until she is forced to work with a producer she doesn't know and doesn't WANT to work with. Despite a rocky start, JC chips away at her icy exterior and finds a way to give her what she's never had before-- a hit song and real, genuine love. 

This story has a sequel - Check it out! :)

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 58796 - Hits: 48530
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 27, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 27, 2008 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!  You know how I get...reading until I get to the end or last chapter but I couldn't help myself.  They've been playing it safe for WAY too damn long!  Ok, I'll tell you how I feel about everything at the end.  LOL!

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So the virgin sex was hot!  Moving on...

Ki

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww honey this was so cute!  I love unfazed JC!  He didn't even blink when she came with that mean bullshit and he fell in love with her anyway.  This was a great read!

Ki



Author's Response: Hah thanks. Callie was a ton of fun to write. I like the sequel to this story even better. If you haven't read it, give it a go! :-D

On a day that was like any other day, which were mostly all the same, JC receives an email that was not intended for him. A very lucky twist of fate connects him with this woman he's never met and doesn't know but means the world to him-- now if only he can stop her from finding out who he really is before he's ready to tell her. And when he does, will she change? 

A cute story, and lots of fun to write. : ) 

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Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Angst, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 34659 - Hits: 24207
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 28, 2008 - Last Updated: Aug 26, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Honey, your stories are absolutely yummy!  It's the only way I can really describe them to you.  You are becoming one of my very favorite fan fic ppl simply because your an amazing writer.  It also doesn't hurt that you think 'Joshua' is as yummy as I do ;)!

Ki

P.S-The most adorable story ever...



Author's Response: Awww, thanks! I got the email and thought...wow someone read You've Got Mail???? Color me surprised!  This one was so much fun to write! Thanks for your thoughts!

This is the sequel to "Let's Start Over". Was previously posted, I took it down to rework it. 

JC has helped Callie to achieve what she could only dream of. It's now her turn to push him to make his own dreams come true-- again. 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 30830 - Hits: 19176
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 10, 2009 - Last Updated: Jan 10, 2009 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok, so thank you so much for giving me the reunion that I along with alot of others I'm sure are DYING for!  I loved this one too much.  I think it's safe to say that you've found yourself a fan in me.  Awesomeness is inspiring!

Ki

Past Featured Story

Corporate drone Serena Willis is living an existence that seems just fine, until she meets a celebrity on a flight to LA. Not just any celebrity, but one she's been dreaming about meeting for a long time. Trapped together as they fly to LA, they begin to talk and sparks fly. Serena takes a chance, and they hit it off. But will this be just a weekend fling, or is this more than they bargained for?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 5, Season 6, Season 8
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 70
Wordcount: 557241 - Hits: 396630
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Feb 22, 2011 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Secrets (Pt2)

I was going to wait until I read all of the chapters until I reviewed but I couldn't wait...YAYAYAYAYAY!!!  That was by far the hottest JC scene ever!  I love that you love him the way I do...he doesn't get appreciated as much as he should and I thank you for doing that.  That chapter was beautiful and so yummy!  I will be reviewing later but I just had to tell you that.  Awesome job and thanks for appreciating him the way I do :)

Ki



Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for the encouraging review!! I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Mum's The Word (Pt2)

You and the sexy, deliciously yummy grown up visual scenes!  I was trying, really I was to wait until I was done but I couldn't.  I'm glad he got time in his schedule to go see her and it seems she'll enjoy every second.  I'm going to keep reading now but again...good shit!

Ki



Author's Response: You can review me ANYTIME!! \r\n\r\nj/k but seriously, thanks for the love, enjoy!