Penname: Kahlymilla [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Apr 07, 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
We've been writing this thing called Nsync Fan Fiction since 2002. We started on Fanfiction.net like most people (still bitter about them closing the section). Then we started our own site that same year (Unspoken Pleasures.net). And it's still up and running.

Anyway, we're glad there is a new archive but it sucks that we have to re-upload everything and all of our reviews are gone. Cries!
Web Site: http://unspokenpleasures.net
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The Unwilling Alliance by Ambs07 (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 3]

Being a Detective for the Los Angelos police department isn't easy, and it especially isn't easy for one Justin Timberlake. But throw in being partnered with the force's "Fuck-Up" child as they all call her is going to be even harder.

But when a serial killer strikes LA will they be able to work together and catch the killer? Or will this define the end of there careers.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Horror, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4879 - Hits: 3058
Complete?: No - Published: Nov 24, 2007 - Last Updated: Jan 06, 2008 -
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Reviewer: Kahlymilla Signed
Date: Nov 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am always intrigued by stories centered around characters in the police force and also possible romances. So I'm definitely intrigued. Um Justin is a capital A.S.S. but still sexy lol. I also like Shannon and their boss seems like he has something up his sleeve.

Shattered Reality by d_simplicity (R) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 9]

Who would have thought ‘that day' was the beginning of the end for us? That was the first time in my life I wished I wasn't Justin Timberlake, having to endure the grief of losing the love of my life and everything I held dear to my heart in our relationship all because of an entry in her diary...

* Written for the Sugar Shack Challenge at Tasting-Eden.com *



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4219 - Hits: 1308
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 28, 2007 - Last Updated: Nov 28, 2007 -
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Date: Nov 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shattered Reality

Oh wow that was really sad Donna. If I wasn't already crying from watching something sad on the television, I'm sure I would have been weeping by the end of this short. It's sad that Jaz didn't even get to hold her own daughter or that Justin didn't get to voice his forgiveness directly. But that's okay because somewhere in those stars Jaz is looking down upon them. Great short.

Author's Response: :(. I know it was really depressing, but I agree it had a sweet ending and I believe Jaz is looking down on them too. :D. So happy you liked it. Thanks a bunch for commenting.

The Ecdysiast by d_simplicity (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 175]

In a world of eroticism, Diane Blossom is one of the most sought after ecdysiasts. She’s a performer, entertainer and mother. Her job description is anything but appealing and her employer is none other than the ruthless hotshot Justin Timberlake himself. He however, is anything but kind and pleasant. Wanting out of this life is Diane’s main goal, not just for herself but for the younger life she is responsible for. However, finding a way out would prove to be more challenging and dangerous than she thought. And it’s all because she ended up meeting him on the job…



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 122665 - Hits: 75651
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 07, 2007 - Last Updated: May 22, 2008 -
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Date: Dec 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: The Show(s)

Okay, I read all the chapters so far of the story, sorry that I didn't feel like stopping to review each chapter lol. Um, please tell me that Justin is bipolar! I mean that is the only explanation to his sadistic behavior. He's a sick twisted man. And I'm pretty sure he's an alcoholic. I would like to know a little more about him in the future as to why he's like this. I have so many questions, why is he obsessed with Diane so much that he doesn't want anyone to have her? Why won't he accept precious Courtney? Just WHY to everything. JC seems like an interesting character, just what this story needs and what Diane needs to. I wonder how the conversation between him and Justin will go. I'll be keeping up with this story. I like how you took this topic and explored it. I enjoy reading stories that don't involve a typical plot so good job Donna.

-Kahli

Author's Response: Wow! Now you know when a great author like you comments then I'm honored. :D. Uh, Justin he's well...he certainly has a major problem that you all will learn about in a later update. Yes, he's very conflicted I agree. Even when I'm writing him I feel the same way...lmao! Well, he certainly loves his drinks that's for sure. I'd probably say he's boderline alcoholic. Don't worry, his past and his current behavior will be explained so no worries there. Just a little suspence to come before that happens. :D. I know there are a lot of unanswered questions huh? Well, they'll get answered I promise. And JC is still a very big mystery so all that will play out. I'm really happy you're liking this Khali. Thanks for the wonderful review and I'll be updating soon. :D

Reviewer: Kahlymilla Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: The Media - Parts 1 & 2

Okay, I started reading this awhile back, but never got around to finishing it or at least I thought I didn't but I read it over anyway. First, let me say wtf is up with Justin. He seems to be solidifying the fact that he is bipolar besides the fact that he is still heavily drinking. Although, I'm happy that he's Diane just a little better especially since he didn't force himself on her this time and Di seemed to be enjoying it a lot too. Let's see how long this act lasts and I wonder why all of a sudden he's like this. Does JC have anything to do with it? Ok on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Heheh so glad you're catching up. And yeah, You'll find out what's up with Justin soon. I promise. :D Thanks for the wonderful feedback. I love when you analyze the updates. It's really great to know what you think. :D

Reviewer: Kahlymilla Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: The Meeting(s)

Evidently, Justin's past is a major fact in his stability/instability...and I still can't decide whether to hate him or feel sorry for his ass. But what shooting that guy really necessary? I mean damn. Needless to say, I was shocked when he cried in front of Diane and apologized too??? Whoa.I used to like JC, but now he just seems mad shady so of course I wouldn't like him anymore. On to the next chapter...let's see how far I can get through it. Oh thanks for the review on our short story.

Author's Response: Yes, Justin's past basically defines who he is now sadly. That's coming up real soon. Well, you should be able to decide whether to hate him or like him soon. Hmm, I'm wondering what type of reaction you guys are going to have then. :). I feel you on the JC part. His part is going to be cleared up too. It's all going to make some crazy sense in due time. And No probs on ur story review, girl you know I'm going to set some time off to ready read you guys stuff. I'm hella interesting in a few of them. I even bookmarked the site. hehe. Thanks for the review.

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Date: Jan 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The Date(s) - Part 1

Wow, Justin is a case isn't he? I'm not going to discuss the stability of his mind anymore until I find out about his past. Someone needs to watch him though because he is a severe case. I don't think Di should be so lenient with JC, she might be setting herself up for something.

I'm glad that Justin is starting to be a little nicer to his daughter, she doesn't deserve to be treated any other way. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes he is! Girl you don't even know. I mean, everytime i'm writing him he's all arguing with me and shit...it's just...he's driving me crazy. Hahaha ok, that was a joke. lmao! I agree he needs some devine intervention. Hopefully di might be a little help...hopefully. And JC...hm. He is just *sigh* I'll see what i can do about him. :D Justin is really a softy at heart. Don't let the rough exterior fool you. Well, i mean. He's soft when he wants to be. :D. More is on the way. Thanks for wonderful feedbacks. I appreciate them.