Penname: MochaB [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Sep 08, 2007
Membership status: Member
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25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
Twitter: brittneymo
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Spoiled by LuLu (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 198]

And I would only be fooling myself if I tried to
Believe there's room for someone else in my heart
There ain't no way I'm getting over you
I don't know what I've been trying to prove
I'm hopeless, helpless when it comes to you
- Joss Stone



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 59
Wordcount: 336631 - Hits: 214960
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 05, 2007 - Last Updated: Jun 09, 2012 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Where Else, But Vegas Baby

Finally! I remember reading this forever and a day ago and got to the part of Cheyenne having cancer and Justin being a match and that's about all that was available at the time. Then I saw you updated and was like "oh my gosh! I remember this story!" so I've been catching the past two weeks or so. Absolutely love this story. The good, the bad, the sad, the frustrating, and definitely the super sexy moments. They're some freaks but i like it. Lol Kiki and Justin have come such a long way and I'm so happy this story is about to end on a happy note with their marriage. The proposal was sweet. Joey was right though. They'll prob kill each other loving each other the whole time. Lol anyway, sad to see it go but can't wait to read the rest!! :o)

Author's Response: Amen! Justin and Kiki are definitely a pair of freaks and they probably will be bickering and clowning each other until they're old and gray LoL.

I know. Its been a long road for Juki. I can't believe its coming to an end, but it was a good run. I'm glad you've stuck around for the ride and enjoyed it. I definitely appreciate the support. Thanx a bunch!!!

He was the music industry's reigning Pop King.
She was the highest demanded lyricist and producer.
Together, they were a powerhouse musical team that was unstoppable.
The Bonnie and Clyde that took over the world.
He was rugged, charming and handsome.
She was unique, quirky and beautiful.
They were also Hollywood's favorite 'it' couple.
*
He had become the center of a crazed obsession.
She had become caught in the middle of it.
Suddenly, they weren't so unstoppable.
The infamous Bonnie and Clyde had suddenly lost all power.
He was the target.
She was the helpless victim.
They were suddenly captured.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 27530 - Hits: 18157
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 09, 2007 - Last Updated: Feb 26, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: September 19

you music update this as soon as possible. it's so good. i'm on the edge of my seat. haha. i really hope justin gets to give sloan her ring, marriage, babies, and a vacation and lots of timberloving. haha. i can't wait to see what happens next so please update soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: September 22

Wow. I got teary eyed throughout this whole story so far, including when I read the proposal. That was so so sweet. Man. I thought I commented when you first started this, but I see I didn't. I'm glad I've caught up though. I love this story, although it made me angry and sad many times, but its different and you've written it very nicely. Trace...boy he better watch out. When you mentioned lynn hurting his nose I was like, "that's right lynn! You go woman! Get him!" Wish she wouldve did more damage. Lol anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next with all the aftermath. Update soon! :o)

How do you apologize for breaking someone's heart? Is there any way to win them back after you have hurt them so badly?

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5006 - Hits: 1882
Complete?: Yes - Published: Sep 18, 2007 - Last Updated: Sep 18, 2007 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All I Need Is You

i remember reading this before...i guess on the old site. anyway, i had to read it again cause i just love it. i like how the characters weren't expected. plus i'm such a sucker for a nice little romantic story. some drama then a happy ending. yes please. haha. great job. :o)

I'll be there if you break
I'll be there if you crumble
Come to you if you come undone
Catch you if you stumble
I'll do what it takes to put the pieces back in place
If you break…
-Frankie J

Addison Miller understands rejection better than anyone else. After finding out a devastating secret growing up, she’s left in the wake to pick up the pieces of a broken heart. Refusing to let anyone hurt her again, she’s built up walls around herself that even her family can’t break down. But when her life takes an unexpected twist, she’s brought face to face with her past, the one thing she’s running from.
Justin Timberlake remembers Addison as the loud, fun-loving girl from middle school. So when a jaded and guarded girl shows up on his tour, he can’t help but wonder what happened all those years and what is it that she’s actually running from?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 37742 - Hits: 42443
Complete?: No - Published: Oct 16, 2007 - Last Updated: Mar 20, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : A day off

yaaaay you're back! haha. i'm really enjoying this story so far. i just hope that justin can help addi open back up and become herself again. there's a lot of internal turmoil it seems. so i commend justin for his efforts. i think she needs to talk about what's been going on and what happened in the past. once she gets it out there, maybe she can then move on. update soon please!

and congratulations on your marriage! i wish you and your husband the best! :o)



Author's Response: Hey there!!! I am definitely back and in action!! haha!! I\'m so glad that you\'re enjoying this story and there\'s so much more for these two! Addison is definitely dealing with inner demons and she\'s trying to open up but she\'s been so guarded that she\'s not even sure how too. But Justin\'s a very persistant person!! haha!! Thank you again for the review and the congratulations!!! I really appreciate it!! :)

A chance encounter with a lady paparazzi leads to something more

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Fantasy

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 8509 - Hits: 8989
Complete?: No - Published: Oct 23, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 23, 2007 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Pose

Gaaaah, I loved this. When do I not love what you write? Really though, I wish there was more of this, but went through 3 time periods in their relationship so it's all good. For some reason the line "Mmmm...your man's good to you." got to me and I just paused then read it again like 5 more times before moving on. LOL awesome work ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: HAHAHA He's a sexy bastard I swear! I kinda wanted to do more with this but I havent had any ideas for it for a long time. Hopefully inspiration will strike sometime! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

You just wanted to get high. What you actually got was so much better.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2043 - Hits: 3643
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 23, 2007 - Last Updated: Oct 23, 2007 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Gets Me High

as many times as i've read this and i have yet to comment? nothing much to say except it was veeeery nice. ugh frankie. *sigh*

Author's Response: Guh I seriously kind of adore Frankie. A lot of people write him soft but I like that he's kinda mysogenistic *giggle* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!

When Skylar McKibbons is kicked off a Grecian Dig her only other option for her Graduate studies internship is to tutor Justin Timberlake, the whiney brat from that one boy band. But the more she teaches him about Art History, the more she ends up learning.

Read the Companion Series: Continuing Education: ALWL Shorts

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 98140 - Hits: 119164
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 25, 2007 - Last Updated: Dec 23, 2009 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2

ohmygosh heather. i have been meaning to read this for soooo long. when you first started it i meant to, then you finished it along with the continuation and i was like "come on brittney! read it!" then i saw those jtpc cards and virgin!jt and i was like, "must. go. read. story. NOW!" haha. so i got to it a few days ago, and girl...this was amazing. i can't even describe how much i love it. it was so hard to read at times cause there was so much inner conflict sky was going through and i hated to see justin so hopeful, giving, loving, and willing only to be crushed, but then come back stronger than before. it was hard, but i loved it at the same time cause you made it real. it all just got to me. then the ending. tiny yelling at her, justin fighting for her to tell him she loved him, then when he told her to let him be a man...gosh! talk about heart wrenching! he taught her so much. but the epilogue was so wonderful. it just tied it all up so well and i love that is was 10 years later. i think that leather jacket dude was her old prof haha. i don't know, but that's who i thought of...well after i thought it was justin at first. haha. but yeah...i mean i don't know if i've told you, but your little vizzies are my favorites. i've read them all so many times cause i love your writing and i'm a perv. haha. but this story, you could really see how talented you are. you wrote it so well and real and gah. i have nothing but great things to say about it. i'm excited to read the little continuation of this that you've completed. skystin will always be one of my favorite couples now. haha. man, i prob sound crazy, but yeah...i loved this so much. amazing job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: Wow what a great review!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. Its my baby and seriously I'll probably never stop writing Skystin or if I do I'll never stop thinking about them. I'm glad they touched you as much as they touched me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!

Slow Dance by Gabo (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 70]

They were drawn to each other the moment they met. But is lust enough to keep them together? Or will Kelen's heart lose the battle against her head?

Time might stop and i'm ok with that
Two left feet, your smile cracks
Your grace makes up for my lack
Slow turn and we're back in step again...



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 129378 - Hits: 65159
Complete?: No - Published: Oct 31, 2007 - Last Updated: Aug 26, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i absolutely love this story. i check back daily to see if there is a new chapter. haha. i'm glad they are talking more about what is going on because communication really is important. i'm sure the fights aren't over for good, but in the end i hope all works out.

and you can't seriously leave us hangning like that! haha. Update soon! :o)



Author's Response: Aww you're too kind! I'm glad you like it so much.

Reviewer: MochaB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

so yeah...that was HOT. haha. So great. :o) I really love them together. I love how they interact with each other. It's just so cute. I'm glad she's having PMS because I don't see that going over too well if she was pregnant. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially over the 2 week period. Update soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He really did love sex. A lot.

haha! that was so funny to me. that was definitely intense...in a wonderful way. haha. i can't express how much i love him and kelen together. they are just so cute and justin is so sweet to her. moving in is a big step though so i hope it goes well. it does seem like they are moving fast, and with justin being terrified about the seriousness of his feelings for her, that could cause some conflict. i don't know...as always, i just hope in the end everything works out. oh! and they party their butts off at the grammy parties. haha.  

update soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this blows. i'm so worried about what is going to happen. i would like for Eli to attempt to make a move, then kelen chew him out, then end their friendship and it be done. sadly, i don't think it'll be that easy and most likely i'm going to end up saying, "nooooooo!!!" and craving/demanding an update that will hopefully solve the drama that i'm sure is about to ensue. :o( haha. i won't be able to read any stories for 10 days because i'm going out of state, but when i come back i hope to be able to read 2 to 3 new chapters. hint. haha. keep it up! :o)

by the way, you write amazing sexual scenes. haha. seriously though, you do. 

Reviewer: MochaB Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

you know...i have to say i'm on justin's side with this one. and even if eli doesn't like her, although i think he does, his presence still causes a problem and could tear them apart whether he tried something or not. kelen keeping the complete truth from him doesn't help justin's jealousy problems. not saying that he's aloud to be jealous and have jealous fits, but her doing that sure doesn't help. anyway, i still love this story! i can't wait to see what happens next so i hope to see a new chapter soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: May 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

uuuuuugh...eli...i can't stand him. and i just know that this isn't the last thing he's going to do to cause problems. he's probably the one that told the media that they visit every week. i'm glad kelen finally sees that he likes her though. she needs to be more wary of him and not assume that he won't try anything. and justin needs to kick his butt. haha. i'm so happy you updated though. loooove this story. i hope you get another chapter out to us soon! :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wooo! man i felt the heat of that one! haha. first let me say that i am SO glad you updated. i absolutely love this story. second, you know...i'm with justin on this. it's understandable that he's busy preparing for tour. it's understandable that she's busy working on this charity event. but like he said, she made him feel so terrible about not being there with her, then she pulls this. the paperwork at the shop could've been done tomorrow. yes, alex is her brother and he has needs, but she could've sacrificed this one time. it's one time. she could've made it up to him by seeing him another day this week. she should've sacrificed something. justin has been doing it the whole time in their relationship, and yes he has done some stupid stuff, but the big forces against them are on her side, whether it's the people in her life or herself. and seriously, what could justin say? if he said that she prob. would've accused him of making her choose him over alex like her ex. ugh. and i'm glad she didn't defend eli! justin stayed in the car and that fool should've stayed in that building! so un-called for! anyway, i really hope we get another update soon. great job. :o)